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Old 04-28-2010, 04:11 AM
Lord Duke the Baron
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I posted this on AF a few days ago, but I'm trying to switch sites so I'm reposting it here. I don't know if I will continue to work on it, but I might. I do have some story that I haven't posted, but it's an unfinished entry.

For those of you not familiar with Bayonetta, I advise you watch this video (linked below) to get the voice of Bayonetta and Rodin. Yes this is a crossover, thanks for asking. I've got more written up, but I wanted to post the introduction before I finish up the first real entry.

Here is the video to get the two voices, you only need to watch the first 20 seconds really.
Bayonetta voice clip and Rodin too

Bayonetta materialized in the Gates of Hell, as she always did, and casually strolled up to the bar. Rodin turned around and Bayonetta threw him a couple of halos.

“You keep bring me these halos and maybe I can by a ticket to space, always wanted to be a bald space marine.” he chuckled. (For those of you who haven’t played Bayonetta, Rodin does actually say this.)

“Just the usual Rodin, thanks.”

“Oh and speaking of space, I’ve got a job for you... if your interested.”

“Alright shoot, keeping the angel population down is easy enough.”

“Some hot shots called the RDA say they’ve discovered another planet, Pandora they call it.”

Bayonetta cut in, “Pandora? Sounds like my kind of place. You know how I love to cause a little bit of chaos.”

“They say they’ve run into some trouble with the locals, that they need someone to clear them out.”

“What’s in it for me?” asked Bayonetta.

“They’re offering some serious cash to whoever can get the job done.”

“I’m in no need of money, but I’ll do anything to get away from the routine of killing angels, I swear they’ve gotten lazier.”

Bayonetta finished her drink, setting it down forcefully, “I’ll go take care of their little problem.”

“Right on baby, right on.”

Bayonetta turned and walked away, dematerializing.

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Old 04-28-2010, 04:12 AM
Lord Duke the Baron
Grif is Grif
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 984

A bit more, sorry if this doesn't fit your tastes. I know the Bayonetta/Avatar market is about 5 people.

She materialized at Hell’s Gate (not to be confused with the Gates of Hell) to the astonishment of everyone around her. She was in the doorway of Parker’s office as Quaritch was walking out.

Parker dived behind the desk, “What the hell!”

“Oh for god sake...” started Bayonetta, but she cut herself off by whipping herself around to face Quaritch, her gun already in her hand.
“Do you mind putting that away,” continued Bayonetta, looking at Quaritch who was just starting to draw his pistol. “If you intend on shooting me you better do better than that. Now get in here.”

Quaritch still in shock, put his gun back and stepped in shutting the door.

“Now I believe that you had a little problem...” she started.

“Who the hell are you?” asked Parker.

“And how did you get on my base?” finished Quaritch.

“You may call me Bayonetta, and how the bloody hell do you think I got here.”

Quaritch started, but Bayonetta cut him off, “Don’t answer that. And may we stay on topic please. You have a problem...”

Quaritch shook his head trying to come to grips with the insanity, “It’s...” he started then restarted but with a stronger voice, “It’s the indigenous life, the Na’vi, they’re in the way of our mining operation...”

“And you couldn’t take care of a couple of little aliens,” she said in a babyish mocking voice.

“They’re not exactly little...” said Parker, who had now recovered a little.

“Well with all of Earth backing you I would think you could, but luckily for you I’m here. I’ll take care of that little pest problem of yours in no time.”

Bayonetta drew open a gateway and stepped into Purgatorio (think of it as being invisible), vanishing before their eyes.

A minute past.

“Did someone just...” started Parker.

“Yes, yes she did,” finished Quaritch.

“Should we trust her?”

“She just materialized and held me at gunpoint, promised to deal with the Na’vi and vanished.”

“I say we don’t ever talk about this, they’ll think we’re mad.”

“For once Parker, I agree with you.”

Bayonetta laughed lightly as she heard the conversation on her way out.

“Idiots,” she thought, but she also heard it at the same time she thought it.

It was Grace who had said it. She had just had a fight with Quaritch and Parker.

“What to we have here?” thought Bayonetta, running past Grace to get ahead of her.

She turned the corner and stepped out of Purgatorio, deliberately setting herself up to run into Grace. She also toned down her appearance some to fit in. Grace walked around the corner, fumbling with a pack of cigarettes, and bumped into Bayonetta.


“Need a light?” said Bayonetta, flicking open a beautifully engraved lighter.

“Thanks,” said Grace as she held up the cigarette.

“I heard a bit of commotion going on back there,” said Bayonetta, starting to walk in an attempt to get Grace to lead the way.

“Yah, well you know what those two are like. One wants to get at the metal and the other wants to blow up anything in his way,” said Grace, unconsciously leading the way.

“I’m trying to get a... fresh perspective on Pandora. Pretend like your starting from scratch and convince me why I should care.”

“Well to do that,” said Grace inhaling some smoke, “we would need to go outside.”
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