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Old 05-23-2010, 03:10 PM
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Today, I had an inspiration. I wrote this on IRC (Then the ending, which nobody has seen yet...)
Fair warning: This fanfic is written in the second person (YOU), and contains passionate love with Neytiri
It is also perhaps not exactly SFW, although it's by no means hugely inappropriate or offensive, I hope
(Yes, it is written for Neytiri fanboys, sorry fangirls if there are any )

Neytiri and you lie by the Tree of Souls, the planet lighting the night sky as bioluminescent life is all around, giving the area a feeling of being alive. The soft light from the Tree's tendrils giving a living glow to the surroundings. Staring deeply into each other's eyes... A subtle grin begins to grace Neytiri's face as she hints for you to hug her. You embrace and begin to kiss each others lips lightly.

Then... Neytiri slowly runs her hands down your legs, then stops to stroke your arms, before moving onto your chest, then gradually working downwards, as your pleasure grows. Suddenly, she stops, reaches behind her and takes her queue in one hand. With her other hand she strokes the back of your neck before taking your queue in her other hand, bringing it around in front of you. She holds the two ends near each other, the tendrils within straining towards each other, trying to make contact.

she gently guides the queues together, and they connect. Instantly, you feel a surge of energy, of deep passion, running the length of your queue and into your mind. As it fades, you feel a physical presence, you are feeling your own body through Neytiri's hands, the feeling simultaneously of your senses and hers. The soft skin under her hands feels just like her own does to you. you hear Neytiri's voice, but she is not speaking. "I See you"... you reach out towards her with your mind, and are overwhelmed by emotion.
You experience memories, feelings. You already know Neytiri better than anyone else in your life, and there is more. you can appreciate what is is to be her, and you understand just how deeply, how completely, she loves you, how dedicated to you she is.

The contact fades, and Neytiri reaches towards your mind as you did. Without any hesitation or reservation, you fully open yourself to her. You can feel her reactions as she experiences, understands.

"You have been alone for far too long, it is not right. You have had nobody to love you, to See you. But I am here now. I will always be with you"
"I See you..."

With the shared experience still in your mind, Neytiri returns to her own mind, as you experience the mutual feelings, the shared physical sensation with renewed appreciation. You both stand up, and Neytiri pushes you against a tree and passionately kisses you. it is the best kiss you have ever experienced in your life, feeling the pure beauty of Neytiri, the sensation of yourself under her lips.

You feel her arms around you, as her tail wraps itself around your leg, tightening, the end reaching upwards, almost to between your legs, as Neytiri pulls herself closer to you.

She stares deeply into your eyes, her perfect eyes growing in the dark, and you gaze into their limitless depths. A person could get lost in those eyes, and never know himself. But for you, you will always know yourself, and Neytiri, for to her, the beauty in her eyes is mirrored in her own, as you see through her eyes from the bond. You see your face, gazing back at her in wonder.

You kiss her again, this one deeper and longer, her tongue gently pushing your lips apart. Your ears turn towards her, as her breathing, mirrored by your own, seems like the only sound in the world, nothing else is important to you, only Neytiri. You realise you would do anything to be with her, and she smiles as the thought reaches her mind.

You mentally reach towards her, and are almost overwhelmed by the depth of her passion. You can tell, she wants you now, she does not want to wait. She feels your own desire as a warmth deep inside and you know she is ready, as you arouse and stimulate each other with the pure emotion of your thoughts.

With a smile, Neytiri gently pulls you towards her again, and as you step forward, Neytiri pushes you down to the forest floor, and you willingly allow her to, knowing what will come next.

On the ground, you embrace Neytiri again, your arms around her as she places her hands on your shoulders. You feel another burst of desire from her as she brings her head closer, absolute unconditional love in her eyes. Quickly, she bites you on the neck, the feeling of her sharp teeth on your skin and of your body in her grip bringing your energy almost to unbearable levels.

Neytiri releases you from her grip and runs her hands down your chest, stroking the smooth blue skin, her fingers tracing the lines of bioluminescent dots. Her tail is raised in passion, her teeth bared as she reaches around, undoing your loincloth, as you feel the intensity and urgency of her desire.



...I think you can tell where this is going... the rest is kind of NSFW, I'd probably be breaking our own rules by posting it here, but you know who to ask so PM me for the ending
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Old 05-23-2010, 03:12 PM
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Beautiful beyond words.

This is the kind of fiction that goes beyond describing and storytelling... it is something more - it touches me, deeply.

You have a huge talent for this. Do not let it die.
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Old 05-23-2010, 03:14 PM
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...thank you

I don't know if there will be more fiction by me, this was kind of a one off, I just got a real, deep inspiration. I'm normally very uncreative
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Old 05-23-2010, 03:44 PM
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Omg that was pure win, imo its hard to think on correct word for it ...................... Thank you .............. thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

and damn do more ! ;p MOAR of Neytiri
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Old 05-23-2010, 03:56 PM
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That was nice
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Wow, very potent stuff HNM.

I would love to see more of this.
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Old 05-23-2010, 04:50 PM
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Wow, very potent stuff HNM.

I would love to see more of this.
Do you mean you want the ending?
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Well, just more...

I won't say how much more though, thats for you to decide...
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Wow... just wow.
This is just the ultimate dream that a Neytiri fan would want to experience. I like your writing style, HNM... as Eltu said, do not let it die, keep your stories coming!
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Old 05-23-2010, 09:10 PM
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Maybe I will then... I just need some inspiration, I guess. This is completely uncharted territory for me, I never had any talent at writing before.
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What can I say?

  • Awesome
  • Amazing
  • Stunning
  • Great
  • Impressive
  • Splendid
  • Glorious
  • Gorgeous
  • Pretty
  • Excellent
  • Majestic?
  • Magnificent
  • Brilliant
  • Sensational
  • Lovely
  • Perfect...
Those are all the synonyms I could come up with (being Swedish, my vocabulary is limited), but I think this one describes it the best.

Edit: Because you deserve it...
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Old 05-24-2010, 08:20 AM
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Epic
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I liked it.

Lemony ending is lemony I guess. However, I did kinda feel like it wasn't the same story. : /

Idk, maybe I just prefer the touchy feely stuff to all that.
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Did you get the actual ending?

Yeah, the story did kind of change mood a bit, but it was always intended to end up there, although it maybe got slightly more graphic than I planned
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Damn this is good. Thanks HNM, you showed me some... nice pictures, or whatever you'd call it.

The ending is nice too!
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