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Old 06-20-2010, 04:53 AM
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Default Avatar FanFic: First Contact.

I'm writing this fan fic called First Contact.

It's about 3 blokes who travel to Coeus(Pandora). First humans to step on the planet. It's long, you'll need to take time to read it.

I write more everyday, updates are almost daily.

It's in google docs, you don't need to sign in to read in.

Update: I finished Chapter 3 and added to chapter 4!

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Old 06-20-2010, 05:54 AM
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its good-ish.
i might keep reading.
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Old 06-20-2010, 06:03 AM
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I love what I've read so far, I look forward to reading more tomorrow (gotta hit the hay for tonight though), great work.
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Old 06-20-2010, 10:01 AM
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Not bad, I'll continue reading as you update.
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Old 06-20-2010, 07:07 PM
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Chapter 3 has been hard for me to write, due to lack of na'vi experience. I'll have more soon.

If you guys have idea on how to improve and bring it more "in line" with avatar, you can send me a Pm or find me on skype!

Skype: Av_daedric

I would love help.

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Old 06-21-2010, 07:21 AM
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just a tiny detail, the ship should be the ISV Prometheus.
the venture star didn't come in for at least 10 years after the first manned mission to Pandora.
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Old 06-21-2010, 06:31 PM
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All right, thanks for pointing it out. I'll have that fixed soon, I have more to upload.

Update! I finished Chapter 3, and added to 4! READ IT

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I like it

Moar please.
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Old 06-24-2010, 09:13 PM
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I added more to chapter 4 just now. I hope you enjoy it. I'll be revising the overall fan fic here soon too.
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I like it very much... it stopped in the middle though... I am disappointed and want moar
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I added more, and I'm adding more now!

Update: I revised up to chapter 4, and I fixed a few spelling errors that slipped by.

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You really need to start doing bigger updates
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Update: I finished 4 and added quite a bit to 5!!!

CONTEST!!!
Ok I made a reference to something a civilization said to newcomers a very very long time ago.

First person to find the correct saying will receive $1 and a cookie. Via Usps.

Nope, I'm not joking at all. I have mailed cookies before. If you live outside of north america, then I may not be able to mail you a cookie.
I hope you like it.
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Old 07-06-2010, 02:12 AM
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Please pardon my double post, but I have an important update to alert everyone to.

I am refining and rewriting part of my fan fic. I recently got my activists survival guide and I have learned many new things to add to the story and I am slowly adding them in.

If you be so kind as to reread the first chapter, it should flow better and make more sense.

You can expect more refinement as the days drag on.
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Old 07-23-2010, 08:43 AM
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All right, Update.

You'll have to pardon me, Ive been working on a few ideas that I haven't released. Im writing a mating scene for my fic and it has been really tough to write, I hope to have that finished by the end of next week so I can continue the story. I have also been quite busy working on a few other projects, like alans project and a few others.

I did a bit of revising as well, up to chapter 3 I believe.

So, I just wanted to keep my readers updated on whats going on.
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