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Old 08-02-2010, 02:59 AM
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“The Eye of Eywa”
(Not knowing exactly what happened, this is my possibility. It might need some editing. Just add comments and let me know what you think.)

Opening his mind was easy, he was eager to make the transition, but he remembered what Grace had said...’I’m with her Jake. She’s real.’...
*breathe.... open.... find the link..... Eywa would guide him*
The familiar swirl of white threads filled his inner vision, but it had a different feel than the link he was used to. A feeling of tsaheylu deeper than anything he had experienced. There was a sensation of pulling and then a pause. He felt in the back of his awareness, his connection to his human body drop away. The light and energy around him pulsed with the energy of the clan in tsaheylu with the Tree, in a feeling that he had never known before. There was a feeling of entirety... of being the planet, feeling the trees, the animals, the People and even Grace and all those that had died during the battle. Tsu’tey, Eytukan.... their presence was welcoming and proud. They were alive, as Neytiri had said, now he believed and understood completely.
*JakeSully*
A female voice echoed in his mind, at once kind and powerful. She was real, as much as any other person he had met just as Grace had told him. Her presence filled his mind. There were other voices and ‘ghosts’ surrounding him, but hers was the brightest light.
*You have fulfilled your purpose. The balance is restored. But there is much more left to do. You must choose wisely JakeSully which path to follow.* The picture of a tree, as large as Hometree appeared, he instantly knew where it was. He nodded mentally, seeing what lay ahead, what he was needing to do. He did so with the conviction and open heart of one who had chosen long before and only needed the proper time and place to make it real.
*You are now who you were meant to be and are no longer the person you thought you were. You are a warrior, that is what has always been in your heart. You have become that and more but you are no longer JakeSully... you have proven yourself.... to have a Strong Heart.*
A new connection pulled him down, the tunnel spiraled and darkness swallowed him. He felt weight on his body, the threads of the tree throbbing in his mind with the energy of the planet and his People. He could hear the singing of The People and Mo’at’s voice exclaiming in a distant echoing, like coming out of a dream. The dream was over, he could now begin to live the life he was meant to live.
He sensed movement, could almost ‘see’ Neytiri lean over him. A gentle hand on his face, familiar and warm, knowing the face that hovered above his own.
*Txur Txe’lan* Eywa’s voice echoed in his mind.
With that, he opened his eyes on his life mate. Her smile filled his vision and his heart with a profound joy.
His old life was a dream that even now faded with only vague moments lingering in his memory. The tsaheylu broke away as he and sat up, the root threads almost tickling as they released him. With his back to the kneeling clan members he looked at his old body so small and pale. He felt a true detachment now, as if that were someone else. Mo’at looked at him with wise approval as Neytiri came around to face him, holding his loin cloth and the ceremonial collar of Olo’ektan. Both Mo’at and Neytiri helped him dress as befits his new role as clan leader and a reborn member of the clan. Neytiri finally, and a bit reluctantly, held out Eytukan’s bow but he gently smiled and put his hand on hers to push it back to her.
“No. That is yours. Eytukan was your father, and gave that to you to lead his People. I still have not made my bow from Hometree.” They both smiled with a small hint of sadness, and Neytiri held onto the bow with pride.
Taking Neytiri’s hand, he faced their people and scanned the rest of the kneeling clan. He had requested that Norm be there, as well as some of the others to be witnesses for the humans. He felt a small sadness that Ron no longer had an avatar, but it was perhaps better that way.
“Oel ngati kameie.” His voice echoed off the stone walls and came back to him. The clan nodded and some answered in return to his greeting. The words of what he wanted to say appeared in his mind but he found he could speak Na’vi with ease now. In Na’vi, he continued.
“My Brothers and Sisters, I have passed through the Eye of Eywa and now stand before you reborn. No longer Jake Sully, for he is no longer who I am. Eywa has given me a new name.” He squeezed Neytiri’s hand and looked at her with a knowing smile before continuing.
“Txur Txe’lan.” There were nods of approval and a few yips from warriors and Neytiri almost laughed in surprise. She had told him he had a Strong Heart, perhaps Eywa had known this as well.
“Eywa has shown me where a new Hometree stands waiting for us. It is there that I will make a new bow as a warrior of the clan and as Olo’ektan and where we shall make our new home.” There were more sounds of approval and murmuring. His tone grew serious then, looking out at so many faces that remained and yet so many that were not there. He felt Mo’at shift behind him and he turned to glance at her, she gave him a small nod with a wondering look. Turning back to the people watching him, waiting for his next move.
“The time of Great Sorrow is past. It is now time to celebrate!”
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Old 08-03-2010, 02:37 AM
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I was wondering that myself. Jakesully isn't a proper Na'vi name; will the clan give him a new one, reflecting his status as a true Na'vi? Though it's anyone's guess whether they will in the next movie.

BTW, the nerdy scientist is Norm, not Ron (thinking of Harry Potter, maybe?). And maybe your story would be better if Mo'at told the clan Toruk Makto's new name.
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Old 08-03-2010, 04:43 AM
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Doh! I forgot to change that! Thanks! That might be a good idea too, it would be Mo'at's realm but would she know it or give it to him?
See, this is why I was hoping for a novelization of the movie from Cameron so we can get more of the characters. Thanks... like I said this is a first stab at a rough idea.
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Old 08-03-2010, 08:56 AM
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I always wondered what it would have been like to experience the transfer from Jake's perspective

I like it though, are you going to continue with it?
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Old 08-03-2010, 03:56 PM
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Thanks!
See, that's the problem with having 'sporadic genius' genes. I came up with that in a flash, and have no idea where to go from there. I usually see stories in 'flash' scenes then, if I continue to get pictures, I can stitch them together into a bigger story. I'm a character writer so until I see more background for the characters in Avatar, it's difficult to see where the story would go.
I have another non fanfic story I'm writing but haven't put it up on the net because it is a work in progress and I want to actually publish it someday.
I have two Babylon 5 shorts that I've written as well a Ranger story I'm working on in the same universe.
I'll see what I can do about more on this or other shorts...
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Old 08-03-2010, 04:47 PM
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Bravo! I really liked it. Thanks for sharing it
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Old 08-03-2010, 08:27 PM
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Old 08-09-2010, 07:39 AM
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With the news that Cameron is writing the novel of Avatar, we may get to see what happened when Jake transferred through Eywa. So, there will be no more on this particular story until I get to read the official version.
I am SO excited that it's being written and can hardly wait to get it!
:: snoopy happy dance ::
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Old 08-09-2010, 08:45 PM
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I think the novel is only going to be a prequel.
Nice fiction though
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Old 08-10-2010, 06:50 AM
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Nope, according to Cameron in the latest interview he is doing a novelization of the movie, not a prequel, though some 'prequel' may be included. Check the update thread MTV Interview with jc about avatar novel.
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