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Old 06-16-2012, 07:11 AM
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Default The Riches of Pandora - Avatar Epic Fan-Fiction Story

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"The Riches of Pandora - Part One: Manifest Destiny" written by PenLogik.

Humanity’s return to the pristine moon of Pandora is bittersweet for some and an opportunity for others. Where there are riches beyond imagination among the forests and in the ground. Riches, worth enormous risk, and bloody sacrifice… Riches, to fight over and die over…

The board’s been set; the pieces are in motion, return to the world of Avatar through the eyes of the innocent and guilty, in pursuit of a “Manifest Destiny.”

Chapter 1 arrives on June 19, 2012.

This thread is the place to ask questions, provide comments, or anything you'd like to discuss related to the novel. If you ask; PenLogik will answer, but there will be no spoilers, sorry.

(A fan fiction novel based on “Avatar” created by James Cameron.)

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Old 06-18-2012, 05:32 AM
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Is this something that's already been written?
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Old 06-18-2012, 03:33 PM
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Old 06-19-2012, 04:20 AM
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Default Answers for Moco Loco and Clarke...

To answer both questions...
@Moco Loco - The stories origins come out of two short stories I wrote in early 2010. They can both be found on fanfiction.net. However, the story that will begin tomorrow evening is a full length novel that includes both of those short stories and a great deal more. As for whether or not someone else has written anything similar, I don't know. I suppose you'll have to be the judge of that, but I hope you decide to give my story a chance.

@Clarke - Patience is a virtue. I simply wanted to let folks know it's coming and establish a place to discuss the work if anyone wanted to talk about it, as the chapters are published. June 19th is almost here and I hope you get to have your own Avatar one day. I'd like one too. =)

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Old 06-20-2012, 02:34 AM
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Default Prologue and Chapter 1 are up on FanFiction.net....

As promised, Chapter 1 and the Prologue have been published to FanFiction.net to enjoy.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8235292/...nifest_Destiny

Before I continue, I'd like to say "Happy Birthday to Zoe Saldana!!"

Back to the details...

As I mentioned previously, this is a novel, part one of two. In case you're worried that you'll get into the middle of the story and I'll stop writing, don't worry. All of Part One has been written and edited...all 55 chapters of it. As well, Part Two has been written and I'm currently in the process of editing it. After Part One is published, we'll move on to Part Two. So there's no need to worry. I have a complete story for you to enjoy for many months to come and I hope you enjoy the conclusion as much I enjoyed writing it.

So how fast will the chapters be posted? Two (sometimes three) new chapters per week on average until the whole story is out there.

I'll be checking in regularly in case readers have questions, or comments. I'll do my best to provide answers but I will not provide spoilers, sorry.

Enjoy the story...
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Old 06-23-2012, 12:20 AM
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Having just read the first chapter, I got put off a bit by the fact that Norm is so formal writing what's stated as his personal log. Not only that, but the tone wavers from journal article almost all the way through to keyboard fart, e.g. "With Jake's [...] for Jake."
I'll read some more later, I just got round to this very late at night.

But I can't really complain that much, since a novel-length anything is a lot more than I've done in any work, by a long shot. Bravo.
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Old 06-23-2012, 04:42 AM
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Default Chapters 2 and 3 are posted on FanFiction.net

New chapters are up for you to read. Enjoy.

Chapter 2: Two Pints for Your Thoughts

Chapter 3: In God We Trust...

As always, I appreciate your opinions and thoughts on the story.

Keep Dreaming,
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Old 06-27-2012, 04:43 PM
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Default Chapters 4 and 5 are up on FanFiction.Net

As promised the story continues...

Chapter 4: The Decision (You might notice a familiar name in this chapter...)

Chapter 5: Stains of Regret (This chapter marks the end of the background chapters and brings us up to the present.)

Some dreams have meaning, some are for pleasure, others tend to be darker, and some have a little of everything in them.

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Old 07-08-2012, 11:03 PM
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Default Chapter 6 and 7 are up to read...

I hope everyone has enjoyed their 4th of July weekend and for those outside the USA, I hope your doing well too.

I've just posted chapter's 6 and 7 on FanFiction.Net

Chapter 6 "Letters to Pandora" introduces you to Nathan LeMay the stories main character. Much of the story is told through his eyes.

Chaper 7 "First Impressions" will reintroduce you to some more familiar faces from the original movie story. Although I doubt you'll be very pleased with Nathan's opinion of Hell's Gate or Pandora. Believe it or not he has good reason for these feelings... *grin*

Happy Reading...
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Old 07-17-2012, 05:30 AM
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Default Betrayed? 3 New Chapters Posted...

Betrayed? Who was betrayed and why? So many questions on the horizon and sooner or later the answers will be too...

Posted today:
Chapter 8 "Questions on the Horizon"
Chapter 9 "Red Sky"
Chapter 10 "State of Mind"

Plots will thicken, background chapters will create understanding, as the conspiracy spreads.

The story grows more complex and there's a long way to go. How are you liking the story thus far?

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Old 08-02-2012, 05:49 AM
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Default 6 New Chapters...that change Nathan LeMay's life forever

Sorry about the delay in posting chapters...I was away last week at BlackHat/DefCon in Las Vegas. Learned a lot and had much fun. I even broke even at the tables. *grin*

Therefore, I decided to post 6 chapters this evening since I missed last week. I hope you're enjoying the story.

Posted chapters 11 - 16.
11 - "Thy Dreams Torn Asunder"
12 - "Reentry"
13 - "Going Off The Air"
14 - "Another Part to Play"
15 - "Message in a Bottle"
16 - "The Castle"

On a side note, some of my readers have requested I post more chapters per week. Request granted. ;-)

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it seems really good i can't wait to read it
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Old 08-16-2012, 04:12 AM
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Default New Chapters are up on FanFiction.Net

Tragedy has been realized. Augustine Science Station has met an untimely fate along with Hell's Gate. What really happened and why? Answers are in short supply but life flourishes despite the questions. Life goes on for the Na'vi and Nathan as they struggle with their losses. School is in session and there are hard lessons for both Nathan and the Omaticaya to learn.


Four new chapters have been posted to FanFiction.Net as the story of Nathan LeMay on Pandora continues...

Chapter 17 - Difficult Lessons
Chapter 18 - Eywa's Blessing
Chapter 19 - Mixed Emotions
Chapter 20 - Blooded

Enjoy the story,

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Old 08-27-2012, 02:27 PM
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Default The Complete Story for Part One: Manifest Destiny is on FanFiction.Net

So you might be wondering what happened? Only a few chapters at a time and then BOOM!...35 chapters and a complete story. Well I have an answer for you.

I've been seeking critical review throughout those first 20 chapters and I did receive a small amount of useful feedback. I wish there had been more because one of my primary reasons for writing this "fanfiction" novel was to sharpen my writing skills.

Don't worry, because when I finish editing "Part Two: Eywa's Blade" you will have the conclusion to Nathan and Niysia's adventure. I expect to post it later this Fall in it's entirety and it will hold even more action, adventure and exploration into the world of Avatar.

So if you've read this far, I appreciate your support and I really hope you enjoy my first novel length fanfiction.

Now that all of the chapters for part one are online, I would be happy to send out PDF or Docx versions to anyone who requests them. I know many folks enjoy reading their novels on their favorite e-reader. (me too! =) )

I love the Avatar universe and like most fans can't wait for more movies and some awesome books to come out in my local bookstore. When that finally happens and I'm sure it will, I hope you think of my story as one of those great stories you read before all that stuff.

Stay Blue my friends...

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