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Old 04-14-2010, 06:53 PM
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Alright, here's the prologue to an Avatar story I am writing. It takes place about 1 year after the end of the movie, and is a crossover.

I have not changed any of the characters that were in the movie, but I have added a character that is a part of an original project that I have been slowly developing for quite some time. That is the only element that is a crossover.

I will be keeping new main characters to a minimum for the sake of purity. There will be one new RDA character and one or two new Na'vi characters aside from my crossover character, and beyond that I do not know.

Anyway, here goes:


The Emerald Stranger

An Avatar Crossover

PROLOGUE


INITIATING SCAN:
PROCESSING SCAN//

<<SUBJECT: JAKE SULLY>>>
<<SPECIES: HUMAN/NA’VI HYBRID>>
STATUS: HEALTHY
HEART RATE: 120 BPM
//:ADDITIONAL SUBJECT DATA DOWNLOADED TO LOGBOOK

<<SUBJECT: NEYTIRI>>
<<SPECIES: NA’VI>>
STATUS: HEALTHY
HEART RATE: 112 BPM
//:ADDITIONAL SUBJECT DATA DOWLOADED TO LOGBOOK

In a massive computer room full of wires and servers, a human sits at a desk, going over spreadsheets of data on a huge computer screen

“Hmmm….that’s all of them. Computer, when is the RDA counterattack scheduled to occur?”

<<ACCESSING COMM CHANNELS……
HACKING RDA NETWORK……>>
ESTIMATED TIME REMAINING UNTIL ARRIVAL: 2:6:20:45:32:59

“About twenty days……July twelfth……Can you give me fleet details or weaponry analysis?

<<ERROR: CLASSIFIED DATA>>
<<COMMAND FAILURE>>

“Well, hack ‘em if you’ve got to!”

<<PROCEEDING…..>>
<<ADMINSTRATIVE LOGIN REQUIRED>>
<<LOGGING IN>>
<<ADMINISTRATIVE STATUS APPROVED. WELCOME, MILES QUARITCH>>

“Heh heh heh…I knew that old man’s data would come in handy somewhere.”

<<FLEET STATUS>>
<<CONTENTS:
6xC-21 “DRAGON” ASSAULT SHIPS
40xAEROSPATIALE SA-2 SAMSON HELICOPTERS
50xAT-99 “SCORPION” GUNSHIPS
50xAMPLIFIED MOBILITY PLATFORM SUIT MK-6
1x “LEVIATH---->>
<<SECURITY A.I. DETECTED>>
<<WARNING! IDENTITY COMPROMISED!>>
<<HACKING ATTEMPT FAILED>>

“Godammit…….get outta there!”

<<SECURITY RESTORED>>
<<SAVING FILES…>>
<<ABORTING…>>

“Agh! Damn, they’re getting smarter. That’s the third time today…Computer, what is the status of the files that were downloaded? How much of them did we get?”

<<ACCESSING>>
<<FILES 66.879% DOWNLOADED>>

“Hmmm….see if you can clean them up well enough for me to read them later. I’m going to get ready to go”

<<AFFIRMATIVE
COMMENCING FILE CLEANUP>>

“Also, keep those Ikran away while I’m gone too, will ya? I don’t like stepping in lizard crap every time I go outside.”

<<AFFIRMATIVE. GOOD BYE, RAIDEN>>

On a giant floating fortress amidst the clouds, a young man steps out of a mechanized hangar door and steps out onto a runway.

“Nice day for flying…armor mode on…”

As he speaks his command, he pushes a button on a small device on his wrist. As if out of nowhere, plates of emerald green metal teleport in and cover his body. A helmet forms around his head, with a crest extending back from the crown. Breathing units appeared and affixed themselves to his face, with crest-like exhaust tubes extending back behind his head. Beetle-like wings appear on his back, and his arms and legs become encased in thick armor plating. A horn appears from his helmet and extends out, and tiny jet engines extend from ports around his knees, ankles, and shoulders. His eyes, now covered by shields of bulletproof glass, take on an azure hue, with piercing vertical pupils peering out of triangular sockets. He now towers at over ten feet tall, an imposing behemoth coated in seemingly impenetrable armor. He claps his metallic, jointed hands with an echoing clang and two transport ducts behind him open.

Two small, pentagonal robotic units zoomed out of the ducts and attached to his forearms just behind his wrists, extending opaque blue blades that seemed to shimmer like holograms.

The onboard computer systems rattled out the start-up check in a tiny, digital voice audible only to him:

<INTERNAL COMPUTER ONLINE>
<<R.A.I.D.E.N AI ONLINE>>
/_UNOBTAINIUM NANOTURBINES_:ONLINE
/_STORM HALBERD_;SYSTEM ACTIVE///:
/_SHOCKCHAIN WHIPLANCE_;SYSTEM ACTIVE///:
/_THOR CANNON_;SYSTEM ACTIVE///:
/_BOOST SYSTEMS_: ONLINE
/_ENERGY SYSTEMS CAPACITY_: 110%
/_MAGNETOPARTICULATE SHIELD_: ONLINE
/_AEROFOILS CHECK COMPLETE>>
<<READY FOR TAKEOFF>>

After a second or two, the emerald warrior slowly walked down the runway as his suit systems began to hum with activity, with puffs of exhaust coming from the crests on his head

<<CONSCIOUSNESS LINK ASSEMBLED>>
<<DEFAULT GATEWAY SELECTED>>
<<LINK COMPLETE>>

The transformed human felt a new presence expanding his mind, and spoke mentally

“What’s up Raiden?”

As he felt his greeting go out, he heard another voice respond in his head:

“Oh, it’s you. Not much. When do we ‘getta fight again?”

“Heh, you must be getting bored in there. About twenty days.”

“RDA?”

“Yeah. We’ve been assigned to this system because of this moon, and I don’t think the Na’vi can suppress a fleet as big as the one that they’re sending this time. I’ve waited long enough; it’s time we taught those greedy apes a lesson.”

“Sounds like my kind of party. How many ships?”

“About 100, plus terrestrial assault vehicles, AMPs, and infantry. I don’t have exact data yet because the computer keeps getting caught by security AI systems.”

The voice in his head chuckled wryly and said:

“You should let me have a go at it; my AI is much more advanced”

“Yeah, I guess it’s about time you had something to do again”

Six small, winglike aerofoils extended from his elbows and legs, and the boost jets on his legs began to glow blue and give off heat. His wings flipped open and turned vertically. The bottom corner of the end of each wing folded away and thin, cylindrical jet turbines revealed themselves.

He ran towards the end of the runway, jumped into the air, and the boost jets covering his body flared blue. He rocketed up into the air, and off of the runway, plummeting out of view. He fell into the clouds, and soon he was past them, falling through the sky against the backdrop of Polyphemus against the hazy blue Pandoran sky.

“Time to pay our subjects another visit…”

“Those blue beanpoles again?”

“Yup”

As he finished the mental conversation, the boost jets roared, and he took off against the horizon, leaving a screaming sonic boom in his wake.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


That's the prologue. Let me know what you think.

The main purpose of the prologue was to introduce the crossover character, some of his motives, who and what he is, and what he is doing on Pandora, while still leaving much of him a mystery.

Also, I need a Na'vi name for a young male Na'vi. I don't know much about the language save for some vocabulary, and I know some of you know some good names. Any ideas?

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Old 04-15-2010, 12:02 AM
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Great story, but what is it a crossover with?
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Old 04-15-2010, 12:57 AM
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Great story, but what is it a crossover with?
Raiden is an original character from something else that I have been working on for quite some time. He is a person that, through interdimensional travel technology and psionic linking (aka Avatar technology), can bond with the conciousness of a very powerful AI named Raiden and "summon" from another dimension an ultra high tech armor that bonds with his physiology, literally becoming part of his body as long as he and Raiden are mentally merged. The person has a name, but that has not been revealed yet, since he will usually be in the suit during the story.

There's more to it than that, but I don't want to spoil anything; I'll be finished editing Chapters 1-4 soon and will be posting them, and they will reveal quite a bit more about him and his motives.

I'm glad you like it so far. I just wish other people would leave a response......
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Old 04-16-2010, 09:30 PM
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Hmm, interesting story..

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Old 04-16-2010, 10:38 PM
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Interesting story, kinda like Iron Man meets Avatar
I look forward to reading more.
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Old 04-17-2010, 04:35 AM
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Interesting
I was also wondering what it was a crossover with though
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Old 04-17-2010, 04:43 AM
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It says what the crossover character is from at the first post.

Also, I already posted the first five chapters of this in the same forum; I just changed the name to "The Verdant Stranger" for originality and so that people didn't think it was some horrible sonic the hedgehog crossover or something.

Link: Avatar Fanfiction: "The Verdant Stanger". Chapters 1 -5

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