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Old 04-26-2010, 11:54 PM
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Default A Moment Of Clarity.

Stemming,
From simple actions,
Primal urges,
Natural experiences...

There was,
A moment of
Complete and utter
Clarity.

Time and space,
Morphed to accomodate,
The experience
That delivered it.

A glimpse,
Of the true way,
The real exisistance,
A full life.

Something says,
I was made,
For other purposes,
Than those preset.

Though as soon as it arrived,
It is gone.
Time marches forth,
Relentlessly.

But that,
Most breif of spans,
Made me feel,
A part of it all.

The rush.
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Old 04-27-2010, 07:14 PM
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Ah, yes. That little moment where you think you understand it all. And then it drifts away and the only evidence it is there is that you know you felt it.

Nice poem. I'm sure everything has had that moment at some point.
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Old 04-27-2010, 07:44 PM
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Exactly neytirifanboy, exactly.

Thank you for reading and thanks for the compliment.
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