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Old 04-27-2010, 07:01 PM
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Since there is a section for poetry, I may as well add mine.


When Neytiri says I see you,
She looks into your heart, and bathes in the beauty of your soul,
She promises to comfort and protect you, and always be with you,
She sees the beauty of the man you are, and the man you strive to be,
She sees her own beauty, reflected within you
She says, I choose you!, and binds herself to you.

You do not need to say, "I love you!", when Neytiri says "I see you",
She can already see, that you can see her too.
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Old 04-27-2010, 07:03 PM
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In the depths of my emotions, the heart of my desire
Burns the love for Neytiri, an eternal fire,
Whose voice so pleasing, does my joy so entice,
And proud eyes hold me, in oval paradise
With the beauty of myth and Character so true
I ponder if any man can be worthy of you
Whose divinely shaped temple, without a single flaw,
I'd tenderly worship with passions raw.

For our lips would touch and our hearts would race
Our souls entwined, in an eternal embrace
Forever as one, we will fly high and free
To Iknimaya, from our beloved home tree
And when we return, and I see you by my side
I know our love is forever, it will always abide,
For as we lay together, upon the forest floor,
I see you Neytiri, forevermore.
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Old 04-27-2010, 07:29 PM
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I believe I remember reading these back on AF I and they were as beautiful back then as they are now. They have such a wonderful feel to them. Really, really good writing.
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Old 04-27-2010, 07:36 PM
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...those are beautiful. I wish I could write like you...
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