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Old 04-29-2010, 04:18 PM
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Default The Change.

So violent,
So brutal,
It hit me.

Morining broke,
All was calm,
Feeling peace.

Then it snapped.
Sudden;
Disarray, pain.

I saw it,
Approaching,
Looming...

But was too slow,
To react,
To stop it.

It's momentum,
Took me.
Dragged me under.

Now,
At the bottom,
I weep.

A connection,
Once so strong,
Broken instantly.

Neither party,
Easily swayed,
It was a struggle, yet;

I know why...
I know how...
I know the circumstances.

But it does
Nothing to ease
The ache.

Will I never again see your;
Face, beauty...
Wisdom?

So now I lay,
Battered,
Bleeding on the floor.

Waiting...

For another day.

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Sorry for this being yet more dark poetry, but I feel really down at the moment.
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Old 04-29-2010, 07:57 PM
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No that does bring up images of Hometree.

But on a more general level it makes me think of hindsight. When you knew something bad would happen and could have stopped it, but did nothing.

It could also relate to what might happen to the human race in the future. We know that we are not doing enough now. Eventually, something bad may happen and we will look back to now and say "We knew this would happen. We should have done more"

The pain of regret.
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Old 04-29-2010, 08:45 PM
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Your poetry really gives me this feeling... it's hard to describe, but it's just so deep...

Oel ngati kameie...
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Old 04-29-2010, 08:48 PM
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I agree^^^ This stuff should be published!
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