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Old 04-30-2010, 07:28 PM
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Never the world
was ready to host the man
that everything ate

---Haiku poem

Blow, breeze of April;
ululate in my ears.
Keep whispering until
clouds drop their tears.

---Quatrain

Machines, roar!
Cars, pollute!
Blocks, host!
Concrete, cover!
Trees, die!
Humans, work!

That's the price of the progress!
That's the price of our lives!

Obey!

---Free verse

I made an exchange,
a real bargain:
food, house and money
for a subtle thing, a detail:
my effort, my mind and my life.

---Free verse

You want to get out?
You know where the door is.
"But out there it's cold"
I never told you 'twas easy.

---IDK

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Old 04-30-2010, 10:40 PM
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Some really good work here Zenit, I can definitely feel it.

I particularly liked the third and last ones.
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Old 04-30-2010, 10:44 PM
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I liked them all Zenit, I see the meaning in all of them. Especially the second, third, fifth and sixth ones really got to me.

Always look forward to reading yours posts.
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Old 04-30-2010, 11:12 PM
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Thanks both,really; it's great to have people like you appreciating these posts of mine. I guess the Haiku was some kind of fail since it's got no relation to any season
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Well, it's not really a fail if the emotional provocation is there which it most certainly is... as with all the poems here.
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Well, it's not really a fail if the emotional provocation is there which it most certainly is... as with all the poems here.
Why thanks
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