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Old 05-02-2010, 02:16 AM
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And so I lay.
In a toxic stupor.
The pleasant aftermath,
Of everything,
That has come before.

Although the remenants,
Should;
Burn,
Destroy...
They do not.

Dazed and disorientated,
I melt into sheer comfort.
I feel I can,
See all too clearly...
Everything.

Links,
Lay themselves bare,
For me to behold.
It all seems so...
Simple.

Added lucidity comes,
From an old friend,
With new,
Contemporary,
Alteration.

It both;
Removes from this world.
Transporting...
Yet further enhances,
The reality.

Is this basic,
Chemical reaction?
Collision ->
Reaction ->
Product...?

I deem not,
For I feel this,
Emerges from deeper,
More heavy
Sources.

Liquid complexes alone,
Could not do this,
To synapses.
It takes something else,
Something rooted.

Something.

Distanced reality.

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I actually wrote this while I was drunk, so sorry if it makes absolutely no sense... I just wanted to share anyway.

Edit: Apologies everyone, I have no idea what drove me to write this one, it was written when I was in a rather confusing place. However, reading it back, it still makes sense to me personally. I may be the only one, but i'd like to leave it posted.
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Old 05-02-2010, 02:26 AM
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A few of the stanzas make sense, but most don't. At least to me anyways.
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Old 05-02-2010, 01:18 PM
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As I said in my edit, it makes some amount of sense to me, but maybe it is more of a personal experience... Thanks for reading anyway.
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