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Old 05-08-2010, 04:47 AM
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One of my Facebook friends asked me to write a poem for her. Since there is a poetry forum I figured I'd post it. This is what I came up with. Enjoy




To be fun loving and always smiling
Making funny faces, laughter howling
To be the one with things in common
The one they love and yet forgotten

Tears drip down around the smiles
Smiles get you through the years
Fate will not forget the love
We felt that time we met with cheers

All we had has now been shattered
We forget so easy, our love is tattered
Like a broken teapot, the steam rolls out
The change of season by us is tout

I realize not how I behave
As I slowly dig my grave
Clouds roll dark as crows do fly
Oh indeed I want to die

Death is nothing but a step
As life is nothing but a waste
This thought I surely would have kept
If I thought you’d never give me chase
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Old 05-09-2010, 08:14 PM
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Lots of emotion poured into this josie, you can really feel it. Thanks for sharing.
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Old 05-10-2010, 01:36 AM
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Thank you!
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