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Old 06-05-2010, 12:39 PM
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If this world were mine,

I would make the skies light blue,
I would make the sunset deep orange,
I would make the trees tall and green,
I would make the oceans wide and blue,
I would make the people love,
I would make the animals free,
I would make the music flow,
I would make life beautiful.

And I would make it all,

For you.

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Uh oh... I appear to be back in my romantic mood again.

*hugs to everyone*
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Old 06-05-2010, 01:32 PM
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*hugs back*

Man, that was awesome
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Old 06-05-2010, 04:18 PM
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truly awesome *returns hugs*
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Old 06-05-2010, 06:22 PM
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I like it... I wish you could have the world to do that
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Old 06-05-2010, 07:24 PM
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Thanks for your responses everyone.

I still believe that, together, we CAN make the world like this once more.
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Old 06-05-2010, 10:46 PM
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Yeah, but as I said on a previous post, "those who have more also are the more capable of making a change for the better to this world; but at the same time whom this system benefits the most".
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Old 06-05-2010, 10:50 PM
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i'd wish the world was like so, it would be soooo much better!
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Nice job man. Though unless we became leaders, influential people, or led a revolution or two, we won't have the best chance of achieving such a world.
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Old 06-05-2010, 11:57 PM
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A classic quote of mine;

"It only takes one tree to make a thousand matches and only one match to burn a thousand trees."
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Old 06-06-2010, 02:34 AM
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Wow. Matches must be really high-grade these days.
If the world were mine.. well, lets be completely honest. You don't want to hear what I've got to say.
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Old 06-06-2010, 07:57 AM
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Wow. Matches must be really high-grade these days.
If the world were mine.. well, lets be completely honest. You don't want to hear what I've got to say.
You'll give it all away to see Tali's face

But Fkeu, I don't understand your quote. I mean, I know that one which says "It takes a hundred years to grow a tree but ten minutes to cut it down"; but never heard of something similar to your saying.
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Old 06-06-2010, 09:21 AM
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But Fkeu, I don't understand your quote. I mean, I know that one which says "It takes a hundred years to grow a tree but ten minutes to cut it down"; but never heard of something similar to your saying.
Well esentially, it's saying that it can only take one person or event to start a massive chain reaction and to change everything.
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Old 06-06-2010, 09:45 AM
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Well esentially, it's saying that it can only take one person or event to start a massive chain reaction and to change everything.
Ahh... Why didn't I realize earlier?

It's a good quote, would you let me add it to my project Veritas?
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Old 06-06-2010, 09:47 AM
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Why not.

It's actually lyrics from a Stereophonics song, I forget which one though.
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lovely poem, i'm certain everyone would do the same
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