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Old 06-14-2010, 12:07 AM
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O paradise...

Why do you taunt me so?
Beauty so glorious,
Eyes so wide.
Drinking in the sight...

These eyes were not meant to behold.

Intoxicated and enraptured,
The mind forks.
It creates a new corner.
Unvisited, unseen and before now,

A private place within a private place.

We visit now and again.
And we sit...

Hear the songs echo,
In our deafened ears.

Inhale the heady aromas
Flowing to our nares.

See the dull glow,
In our smitten eyes.

Feel drops falling,
On our warm skin.

Taste the electric,
Shocking our tongues.

Together, within our place we are real.

Then we turn.
Embrace for an eternity.
Merging, converging,
One.

Collapsed in a haze of cherishment.

Suspended in time, a shrine to a true forever.
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Old 06-14-2010, 05:59 PM
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Wow... its beautiful.
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Old 06-14-2010, 06:15 PM
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Amazing. It really touched my senses, great work =]
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Old 06-14-2010, 06:34 PM
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Old 06-18-2010, 11:13 PM
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Sorry it took so long to respond everyone.

Thanks for all your wonderful comments, it really does help drive me.
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