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Old 07-05-2010, 10:09 PM
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Default Everything Comes To A Full-Stop.

Forcively.
Undesired.
Unneeded.
Pain.

Necessary.
Questioned.
Realised.
True.

Focussed.
Confused.
Varied.
Lost.

Repositioned.
Recollected.
Reformed.
Returned.

Back.

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Old 08-05-2010, 05:34 AM
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Nice. I like the use of single words in order to provide more impact within a minimum space (especially the use of single syllable words at the end of each stanza)...
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