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Old 09-09-2010, 10:26 PM
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What to give?
For a pefect run...
For no foot,
Nor skin,
To touch,
The compact.

To traverse,
Energy fields.
And for it,
To last,
An eternity
Or two.

One soul,
One dream,
One love.
And also,
One tear.
Pain concentate.

Thrust fast,
Into a coil,
A spiral...
Endless plains.
No hues.
So bleak.

No range.
To where,
Hand of
Greed, hatred
Uncast,
Lays.

Thus.

Making do...
Getting through...
Stumbling, trudging...
Sapping, killing.
Searching,
Evermore.

Dare I...?

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I couldn't think of a title for this, so please do accept my apology on that. Plus, I guess it doesn't really make much sense to anyone who isn't in my mind right now. So i'll say this...

I'm looking over the edge of a glorious pool.
But is the water deep enough to dive into?
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Old 09-10-2010, 01:27 AM
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Sorry Fkeu. I can't take much from this poem. I read it and I get many meanings from many stanza's. But, they are very vivid meanings.

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Old 09-10-2010, 08:44 AM
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It's alright...

I suppose it's a pretty personal poem, I just needed somewhere to write it.

Thanks for taking the time to read it anyway.
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Old 09-10-2010, 09:47 AM
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I understand the feeling...

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Old 09-10-2010, 02:07 PM
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This is the kind of poetry I like the most. Feelings described shortly.

A great poem Fkeu'itan. I love it.
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