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Old 02-28-2011, 01:37 PM
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so decided to post another poem for Princess Neytiri...


Your skin looks smooth
I just want to feel it against mine
Your lips
Looks just as fine
I want to kiss them
And never stop
What do you say...
Take my hand
And never stop?
Because i will never stop
Loving you...


thoughts?
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Old 02-28-2011, 02:58 PM
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Write more! Let Neytiri will be your inspiration. Forever.
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Old 02-28-2011, 11:02 PM
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another nice one
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Old 03-01-2011, 09:35 AM
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So true...
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Old 03-01-2011, 10:43 AM
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thanks for the kind comments once again
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Old 03-02-2011, 10:05 PM
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Another artisic one prowler!!
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Old 03-05-2011, 10:04 PM
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thanks james
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Old 04-04-2011, 04:16 PM
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i'm very bad with poems myself, sounds full of emotion, nice work
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