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Old 04-15-2011, 10:37 AM
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Do you remember last summer?
In the heat and the haze,
We danced together.

Danced our lives away,
Day following day...
Without second thought or care.

Yet, as day became strangled...
Drawn away and devoured,
By the encroaching chill,

You stopped.

No longer did music flow.
Nor your feet pound.
Nor your body move.

You became a golem.
A statue of stubborn still,
Of suspended pain and memory.

Frozen solid,
By cold...
Dark.





Now...
But slow,
Winter surrenders.

The light begins again,
To force out the cold,
Pushing through every pore.

The flame of sol,
Gently licks your skin
Igniting a feelings within.

At first, powerfully, but subtlely...
Beginning to thaw...
Suddenly, you liquidise.

The cry rings out, the drums begin.

Feet shatter the earth, uncontrollably.

Bodies clash together, with themselves.





May I have this dance?
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Old 04-15-2011, 10:45 AM
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Nice song.
It's great to see you on here Fkeu'itan.
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"The man who learns only what others know is as ignorant as if he learns nothing.
The treasures of knowledge are the most rare, and guarded most harshly."
-Chronicle of the First Age


"Try to see the forest through her eyes."

Réalisant mon espoir, Je me lance vers la gloire. Je ne regrette rien. (Making my hope come true, I hurl myself toward glory. I regret nothing.)
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Old 04-15-2011, 11:33 AM
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Yeah, I love that song so much, as with a lot of Blu's stuff.

It's also good to be back.
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Old 04-15-2011, 03:51 PM
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It's great to see you on here Fkeu'itan.
I concur.
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Old 04-16-2011, 12:31 PM
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It's almost time to have a celebration.
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My fanfic

"The man who learns only what others know is as ignorant as if he learns nothing.
The treasures of knowledge are the most rare, and guarded most harshly."
-Chronicle of the First Age


"Try to see the forest through her eyes."

Réalisant mon espoir, Je me lance vers la gloire. Je ne regrette rien. (Making my hope come true, I hurl myself toward glory. I regret nothing.)
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Old 04-16-2011, 12:33 PM
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Well, I really would with everyone, if I could.

I guess we'll just have to stick with bedrrom raving for now though.
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Old 04-16-2011, 12:39 PM
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Haha yes! Anyone have any cool rave lights or effects in their room?
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"The man who learns only what others know is as ignorant as if he learns nothing.
The treasures of knowledge are the most rare, and guarded most harshly."
-Chronicle of the First Age


"Try to see the forest through her eyes."

Réalisant mon espoir, Je me lance vers la gloire. Je ne regrette rien. (Making my hope come true, I hurl myself toward glory. I regret nothing.)
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Old 04-16-2011, 12:59 PM
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Haha yes! Anyone have any cool rave lights or effects in their room?
That would be Stan ..

(as mine are all packed away, lol)

And absolutely esquiste poem Fkeu'itan! Quite moving!
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Old 04-16-2011, 01:04 PM
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Hehe too true, I was saying that with Stanley in mind.
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My fanfic

"The man who learns only what others know is as ignorant as if he learns nothing.
The treasures of knowledge are the most rare, and guarded most harshly."
-Chronicle of the First Age


"Try to see the forest through her eyes."

Réalisant mon espoir, Je me lance vers la gloire. Je ne regrette rien. (Making my hope come true, I hurl myself toward glory. I regret nothing.)
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Old 04-18-2011, 03:55 AM
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And absolutely esquiste poem Fkeu'itan! Quite moving!
Yes, this!
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