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Old 04-18-2011, 04:07 AM
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alm livu oe
sl mkam moe
n'aw taw a'aw lu
s 'awa tvawm hu
sanh ateng nwotx

I may be far
but between us
is only one sky
and one darkness
with all the same stars
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Lu ftxan ftue fwa nitrama tute lu, sl lu ftxan ngzk fwa ftuea tute lu.

It is so simple to be happy, but so difficult to be simple. ~ Guruji
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Old 04-18-2011, 09:19 AM
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alm livu oe
sl mkam moe
n'aw taw a'aw lu
s 'awa tvawm hu
sanh ateng nwotx
Lor ntxan ma Alyara! I think moe should be oeng, though. Moe is exclusive of the person being addressed. Not too sure about alm livu oe either. Lu isn't used to express location. Maybe hufwa alm tok oel?

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Old 04-18-2011, 01:46 PM
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Lor ntxan ma Alyara! I think moe should be oeng, though. Moe is exclusive of the person being addressed. Not too sure about alm livu oe either. Lu isn't used to express location. Maybe hufwa alm tok oel?
I could do something with that, I guess:

oel tivok alm
sl oengmkam

n'aw taw a'aw lu
s 'awa tvawm hu
sanh ateng nwotx

It doesn't rhyme perfectly, but then I don't require perfection.
Thanks for your comments!
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Old 04-18-2011, 10:59 PM
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I love it! So true too...


...I had to cheat and use the English one.
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