These times... - Tree of Souls - An Avatar Community Forum
Tree of Souls - An Avatar Community Forum
Go Back   Tree of Souls - An Avatar Community Forum » Fan Work » Fan Poetry

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
  #1  
Old 05-16-2011, 04:06 PM
Pamtseo Vitra
Fkeu'itan hasn't been here in years.
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Aberystwyth, Wales.
Posts: 2,562
Send a message via Skype™ to Fkeu'itan
Default These times...

In the moment...

You can't feel yourself,
You're numb,
And you feel hollow.

When you look in the mirror,
And you don't...
Recognise your own eyes.

When you can't hear,
Over the deafening noise,
That static, life creates to drown your loss.

When your body takes no more,
No more nourishment,
No more thought.

Your mind gives in,
While your soul...
Won't let out.

And all the time, you're stuggling
And you're fighting, evreything...
That it's telling you.

Fighting to the inch,
With every concievable,
Stretch and pull you can force.

Scraping and scratching,
At the walls of the hole,
That you're hopelessly encircled by.

Shouting to a person,
'Till rasping voiced...
Even though they don't exist.

Grasping at lines, imaginary...
Anything at all...
To pull yourself out.

All for a measure of mercy.





"What are we going to do?"
("что делать будем?")





"Enjoy the moment."
("наслаждаца моментом")
__________________
"When the time comes, just walk away and don't make any fuss."
Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old 05-16-2011, 07:52 PM
apache_blanca's Avatar
Dream Hunter
apache_blanca has no status.
 
Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: REAL body Pandora, human avatar Spain
Posts: 1,060
Default

oh my! this sound rather desperate & lonely... do you really feel this way?
(in fact any of my prison pen-pals could have written that (I am in a prisoner helping NGO) - such a degree of despair! Scratching at the walls... what an image... I just wonder what makes you feel like this?
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 05-16-2011, 11:52 PM
Pa'li Makto's Avatar
Palulukan Makto
Pa'li Makto : Once ate an octopus.
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Australia
Posts: 3,909
Default

This is a nice poem. I hope you're doing alright as well though.
__________________
Always listening to The Orb: O.O.B.E...



My fanfic

"The man who learns only what others know is as ignorant as if he learns nothing.
The treasures of knowledge are the most rare, and guarded most harshly."
-Chronicle of the First Age


"Try to see the forest through her eyes."

Ralisant mon espoir, Je me lance vers la gloire. Je ne regrette rien. (Making my hope come true, I hurl myself toward glory. I regret nothing.)
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 05-17-2011, 05:04 PM
Pamtseo Vitra
Fkeu'itan hasn't been here in years.
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Aberystwyth, Wales.
Posts: 2,562
Send a message via Skype™ to Fkeu'itan
Default

Thank you so much for reading, and thanks for both of your concerns...

Yes, i'm doing alright at the moment, I just went through a rough patch for a while a few days ago. I don't think i'm completely over with the issue I was struggling with just yet, but it's getting better day by day.
__________________
"When the time comes, just walk away and don't make any fuss."
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 05-17-2011, 05:09 PM
apache_blanca's Avatar
Dream Hunter
apache_blanca has no status.
 
Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: REAL body Pandora, human avatar Spain
Posts: 1,060
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Fkeu'itan View Post
I don't think i'm completely over with the issue I was struggling with just yet, but it's getting better day by day.
well that's good news!
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 05-17-2011, 07:39 PM
Human No More's Avatar
Toruk Makto, Admin
Human No More has no status.
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: In a datacentre
Posts: 11,750
Default



Well, good to hear that though, but still, I hope things get better.
__________________
...
Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 05-20-2011, 01:12 AM
Alyara Arati's Avatar
Dreamwalker
Alyara Arati soft focus
 
Join Date: Apr 2011
Posts: 37
Default

A small "I hope you feel better soon" poem; I don't do Hallmark, but the sentiment is true.

from darkness
deep within, beneath the benthic depths
the snow fresh moon awaits
to slowly shower down, in pale puffs
her brilliance ascendant
__________________

Lu ftxan ftue fwa nitrama tute lu, sl lu ftxan ngzk fwa ftuea tute lu.

It is so simple to be happy, but so difficult to be simple. ~ Guruji
Reply With Quote
  #8  
Old 05-20-2011, 05:57 PM
Pamtseo Vitra
Fkeu'itan hasn't been here in years.
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Aberystwyth, Wales.
Posts: 2,562
Send a message via Skype™ to Fkeu'itan
Default

Thank you, Alyara, for some very, very beautifully put words... In fact, it brought back a very beautiful good memory of mine.

Thanks for the moment.
__________________
"When the time comes, just walk away and don't make any fuss."
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On



Visit our partner sites:

      pandoraworld.ru



All times are GMT +1. The time now is 10:49 PM.

Based on the Planet Earth theme by Themes by Design


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2019, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.
Content Relevant URLs by vBSEO ©2011, Crawlability, Inc.
All images and clips of Avatar are the exclusive property of 20th Century Fox.