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Old 06-04-2011, 01:20 PM
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Feeling
every scar
remembering
every fire
tormented by
her own children

Screaming
in pain
crying
in vain
ignored by
her own children

Freedom
no longer
peace
among none
ravaged by
her own children

Memories
of life
expansion
their knife
murdered by
her own children

Still
they fare
the few
who care
loved by
her own children.

My love for Earth in writing, despite all this.
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Old 06-04-2011, 03:33 PM
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The Earth is my first, and last love. Thanks for posting...What a poem.
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Old 06-05-2011, 01:01 PM
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Makes me wish there was something more that could be done...
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Old 06-05-2011, 03:14 PM
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Wow, that really is some truly incredible writing, Advent...

I really wish to see more from you soon!
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Old 06-05-2011, 08:10 PM
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very sad and very sweet.

Quote:
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Makes me wish there was something more that could be done...
not to give up, I guess...
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Old 06-07-2011, 03:05 PM
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Indeed very moving, this one. Sometimes I feel by empathy that scars and that pain and hear the screams...
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Old 06-07-2011, 03:19 PM
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What do we do?
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