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Old 08-21-2011, 02:53 AM
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F'u ke lu trol tyawn.
Oel ke omum fya'ot a pamrel si f'ur.
Talun kea tutel alahe
kawkrr ke 'eykolefeiu oer ftxan teya.

Ha f'u ke lu trol tyawn.
F'u ke lu lor; ke tsun oe ngivop pamtseot.
Hufwa krr a nga lrrtok si
txe'lan oey lam na atan mfa oe.

Sl f'u ke lu trol tyawn.
F'u lu ftuea tngay vitray oey n'aw.
Ngari irayo si oe ntxan;
f'u to fwa oe slpoley tsn tivel oe.




This is not a love song.
I don't know how to write one.
Because no other person
has ever made me feel so joyful.

So this is not a love song.
It is not pretty; I cannot make music.
Although when you smile
my heart seems like light within me.

But this is not a love song.
It is only the simple truth of my soul.
I am so very grateful for you;
this is more than I hoped to recieve.
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Lu ftxan ftue fwa nitrama tute lu, sl lu ftxan ngzk fwa ftuea tute lu.

It is so simple to be happy, but so difficult to be simple. ~ Guruji

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Old 08-21-2011, 07:17 PM
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...wow



Beautiful.
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Old 08-21-2011, 07:42 PM
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Tsa'u lor That was really baeutiful keep up the good work.
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Old 08-22-2011, 02:10 PM
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Thank you ma mesmuk! I wanted to try writing something about love that was not flowery or pretty, but that was made beautiful because of the subject matter and the depth of feeling in it. I'm very glad that you two liked it! Perhaps I didn't do so badly after all.
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Lu ftxan ftue fwa nitrama tute lu, sl lu ftxan ngzk fwa ftuea tute lu.

It is so simple to be happy, but so difficult to be simple. ~ Guruji

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Old 08-23-2011, 04:21 AM
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It's beautiful because it's simple. This is exactly the type of style I love.
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Old 08-23-2011, 10:24 AM
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Really very nice indeed...

I would LOVE to her it spoken in Na'vi.
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Old 08-23-2011, 06:09 PM
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I wanted to try writing something about love that was not flowery or pretty, but that was made beautiful because of the subject matter and the depth of feeling in it...Perhaps I didn't do so badly after all.

Yeah, this is why I like it too. It's very simple, clear, and sincere. Not badly done at all.
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Old 08-24-2011, 01:22 AM
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Irayo ma pxesmuk! I very much appreciate your thoughtful comments. I, too, value this one for it's simple earnestness.
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