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Old 08-27-2011, 11:20 PM
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Default Onwards (Pt. 2)

And yet...
If this film of life,
Could be sped up...

It would be a capture,
In perfect resloution.

All you ever felt.
All you ever wrote.
All you ever saw,

To be brought forward,
Compressed and compounded,

'Till it lasted none but,


None but even the infinitely slightest of flashes...

Would you miss it?
"When the time comes, just walk away and don't make any fuss."

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Old 08-29-2011, 07:56 AM
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I guess the best words i could find to describe the beauty of both poems would be

El duende


Zen Meditation

dying to die
dying to live
that's the only way
i know how to express it
the actuall physical sensation
of meditating a poem
defining a 'moment'

fovever dying
forever living
forever embracing it
forever loving it
forever not having to miss it

and contraction
birthing and dying
in a in a zero point seed

where everything exists
and nothing exists
but the embrace
of now
in a singular moment

It was impossible not to have, It's impossible not to be, It's impossible not to still ...!

What this world really needs is more artists and environmentalists!

"Its only 'here' that we lose perspective, out at the Cosmic Consciousness Level things get a lot clearer. For example, there is an actual star pattern that is traced in the shape of a Willow Tree, across the breadth of the Milky Way! And no wonder Indigenous peoples refer to the 'here after' as the Happy Hunting Grounds! Has it ever occured to anyone why the bioluminescence dots, on the Na'vi!"

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