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Old 08-31-2011, 08:09 PM
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What if we were to imagine
that it was not Cameron
whom dreamed and visioned
Pandora and the Na'vi
BUT the Earth herself
whom was the one
to inspire him

Deep below in the recesses
of her heart and soul and mnd
broken hearted, disenchanted
by the surface world
of her children's being
Retreating within her
higher understanding
she rewove the story threads
to give them new meaning

Starting back to some
ancient beginnings
where the Garden of Paradise
was manifestly apparent
Contented
she created a new world
and race of creatures
reminicent of old
yet recloaked even more
in the fantastical
restoring the balance
of previous lessons
connectivity, harmony
ancient spirals and patterns
of storytelling and song

Where the "Goddess'
was honoured
appreciated and cultivated
"Eywa" is Her reborn
and below the surface
a new planet adorned.

What if it is she
calling out to 'awaken'
to rethink, revision, re-'see'
beyond our limited
delination and relegation
compartalized condition
lying just below
the 'tangible' construct
of reality the illusion
is the promicing
of something far better
and renewing.

What if Pandora and the Na'vi
are just a threshold away
needing only closing
our dulled, blinded, clouded
wearied eyes
crossing over to another world
less than a heartbeat away.

We 'see' only what we want to 'see'
and what sociatal constructs
want us, captivated
But if I look a way
to a space inbetween
This world fades away
and only the other apparent

What if is was the Earth
that dreamed a dream
and is just waiting

2011
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Old 08-31-2011, 08:33 PM
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Very beautiful.

Also...

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Old 08-31-2011, 08:59 PM
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I really, really like this poem Mika, it's style, *exactly* the kind I so enjoy reading.

Especially liked this bit when I read it...

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Where the "Goddess'
was honoured
appreciated and cultivated
"Eywa" is Her reborn
and below the surface
a new planet adorned.

What if it is she
calling out to 'awaken'
to rethink, revision, re-'see'
beyond our limited
delination and relegation
compartalized condition
lying just below
the 'tangible' construct
of reality the illusion
is the promicing
of something far better
and renewing.

What if Pandora and the Na'vi
are just a threshold away
needing only closing
our dulled, blinded, clouded
wearied eyes
crossing over to another world
less than a heartbeat away.
It really reminds me that we can all be Na'vi, if we sincerely try - and want - to be.
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Old 09-01-2011, 02:23 AM
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John Lennon, but he's not the only one
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Old 09-01-2011, 03:38 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Mika View Post
What if we were to imagine
that it was not Cameron
whom dreamed and visioned
Pandora and the Na'vi
BUT the Earth herself
whom was the one
to inspire him

Deep below in the recesses
of her heart and soul and mnd
broken hearted, disenchanted
by the surface world
of her children's being
Retreating within her
higher understanding
she rewove the story threads
to give them new meaning

Starting back to some
ancient beginnings
where the Garden of Paradise
was manifestly apparent
Contented
she created a new world
and race of creatures
reminicent of old
yet recloaked even more
in the fantastical
restoring the balance
of previous lessons
connectivity, harmony
ancient spirals and patterns
of storytelling and song

Where the "Goddess'
was honoured
appreciated and cultivated
"Eywa" is Her reborn
and below the surface
a new planet adorned.

What if it is she
calling out to 'awaken'
to rethink, revision, re-'see'
beyond our limited
delination and relegation
compartalized condition
lying just below
the 'tangible' construct
of reality the illusion
is the promicing
of something far better
and renewing.

What if Pandora and the Na'vi
are just a threshold away
needing only closing
our dulled, blinded, clouded
wearied eyes
crossing over to another world
less than a heartbeat away.

We 'see' only what we want to 'see'
and what sociatal constructs
want us, captivated
But if I look a way
to a space inbetween
This world fades away
and only the other apparent

What if is was the Earth
that dreamed a dream
and is just waiting

2011
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Lor liu!!!

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Old 09-01-2011, 08:55 AM
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I read it 5 times. /me likes.
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