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Old 10-03-2011, 04:39 AM
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I wrote this a long time ago before I was on ToS. It's sort of appropriate.

How can it be that I'm alone?
I say that I don't really know.
Yeah, when I'm feeling lonely,
I pretend I'm someone else.
Sitting in my car,
burning fossil magic,
I wish that I were somewhere else.
Weaving through my cousins and neighbors,
I'd really like some more space.
The closed system gets full.
Something had to change.
Maybe I'm better than I thought,
and I will be happy, even alone.
Yeah, when I am feeling lonely,
I pretend I'm saving the world.
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Old 10-03-2011, 06:18 AM
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I always like these heartfelt poems.
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Old 10-03-2011, 10:27 PM
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I know the feeling, exactly...

In a way, we're all alone.
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Old 10-03-2011, 11:31 PM
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I didn't really mean it as a sad poem. Does it come off that way?
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Old 10-05-2011, 08:27 PM
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Sad isn't quite the right word for how I felt, more like understanding - maybe a little sad, but that's not the predominant emotion. Maybe it's because it's so true.
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Old 10-11-2011, 01:33 AM
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I can relate to this poem very much. I am glad you have shared this; thank you.
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Old 10-11-2011, 09:30 PM
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I used to feel lonely more often than I do now. It just helped to think of it this way I guess that maybe it doesn't matter, or maybe even that it's for the best somehow.
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