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Old 10-13-2011, 11:43 AM
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So, I managed to think this up while sitting in my room alone for a while. A little poem about selfless love. Enjoy.

My life
My happiness
My anger
All yours
My adoration for you
Worthy of ancient lores
Fire and Ice
Light and Shadow
They mean nothing to me
When I think of your roars

Surely you are
My meaning in life
Despite your temper
Being quick like a knife
A flower for some
Yet bearing much strife.
For you though, my sweet
A little treat
My adoration for you;
Like a man to his wife

Despite your imperfections
I enjoy your reflections
Ever sending me
Into new directions
Heighten my senses
Lower your defenses
My adoration for you
Requires no census

This gift of mine
I send to few
But my adoration
Belongs truly with you.
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Old 10-13-2011, 08:52 PM
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d'aaawwww! I love it, it's cute. I sang it in my head like a song.

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Heighten my senses
Lower your defenses
My adoration for you
Requires no census
^ this last line felt kind of out of nowhere, but maybe that's just me. I'm a very literal reader.
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Old 10-13-2011, 10:27 PM
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d'aaawwww! I love it, it's cute. I sang it in my head like a song.
Glad you like it.

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^ this last line felt kind of out of nowhere, but maybe that's just me. I'm a very literal reader.
I guess at the last couple of lines I was running out of things to say...
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Old 10-14-2011, 02:03 AM
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I find that happens to me if I ever try to write poetry. Whenever I do write it, it's sort of like I'm really just discovering what was already there
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