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Old 10-24-2011, 05:17 AM
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OH SNAP Moco is writing trashy short love poetry?? WTF is going on up in this bitch.
Hell if I know. Anyway, I don't want to litter up this poetry board, so I'd really rather keep it in here.

The worst way
The worst place
Will I ever even see your face?
Will you stay a mystery?
Will you always be a dream?
Who are you, do I really know?
Maybe someday, when I go
All the world will be my own.
I'll never have to be lonely.
Maybe you can be happy too.
Maybe together, things can change.
What a hopeful dreamer I am.
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Old 10-24-2011, 05:23 AM
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Short and sweet. I liked it.
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Old 10-24-2011, 08:28 AM
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That's a very sweet poem.
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Réalisant mon espoir, Je me lance vers la gloire. Je ne regrette rien. (Making my hope come true, I hurl myself toward glory. I regret nothing.)
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Old 10-25-2011, 01:00 AM
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It's really true.

We can know someone well, without meeting them, and we could never know how they feel
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Old 10-25-2011, 02:49 AM
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Okay, here's the next one:

I want to see you.
I want to meet you.
I want to tell you everything.
How you're different
I don't do this.
I want to give you everything.
I look out upon the vastness.
I know that you're looking too.
I've been waiting for an alien.
Now, I want to be with you.
You are always on my mind
even as the months go by.
You make me a Dandy Lion
and you don't even have to try.
Just to simply know you're there
far away as you may be
speaking to you is enough
somehow to maintain these feelings.
In a while, I know I'll meet you
but I won't tell you anything.
You are different
but I don't do this.
I just hope I
Won't regret this.
I will forget everything.
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Old 10-26-2011, 04:59 AM
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Going to add one more. Lucky for me, it's no longer relevant.

I have to let this go.
I know I have to let this go
But I'm holding on.
I'm letting it grow.
No going back.
(At least you don't know)
And you never will!
I'll never tell
Even if you know me well.
I let it grow
But even so
I'll just be glad to be your friend.
Even if you can't be mine
I'll be yours until the end.
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Old 10-26-2011, 05:56 AM
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Dandy lion.
Excellent piece (or pieces) of poetry, my friend.
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Old 10-27-2011, 12:23 AM
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There's no need to any longer.

Feeling that way, I never knew
If the same thoughts lived in you
But what could have been?
If only we'd seen
Just how we wanted things to be
To make a bond of you and me
It takes strength to show
What goes unspoken
But at least I know
My heart's not broken.
No longer scared you're just a friend
I'll be yours, there is no end.

This took AGES to write. I hope it's good.
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Old 10-27-2011, 05:12 AM
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I love it, it's very good

<.< This thread was a fantastic idea.
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