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Old 10-28-2011, 11:33 AM
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Default Progression.

Deeply dystopian, the move to the future.
The city, criss-cross like a land solely suture.
Sick corrosive light in a world full of pain.
Solution slick tarmac, the thick acid rain.
An industry collapse, a cry lost in dark.
From form and from froth, no longer we hark.

And, you don't...
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Old 10-28-2011, 12:39 PM
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Very interesting, but it confused me slightly.
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Old 10-29-2011, 04:39 PM
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It was actually written to be a rap, spoken over the top of Synkro's track, 'Progression', but seeing as i'm not an MC, I thought I would post it here instead.

(The track's sound itself actually gives a lot of context to the words.)
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Old 10-30-2011, 12:33 AM
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Oh, I see.
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