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Old 01-11-2012, 05:11 PM
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A waterfall of tears,
flowing, falling,
saturating,
the pillowed landscape.
Murmurs muffled,
weeping softly escaping.
Washing away all that has been,
passaged by.

Stilled waters stagnate,
dried up putrifying bitters,
unfit for plant, animal or man.

Water cleanses,
relinquishing
everescent element
downpours and torrents,
refreshing,
parched mired clay.

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the spirit of this poem is such that it would be better sung in Na'vi
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Old 01-11-2012, 09:15 PM
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I like it... it's a good feeling, I hope it's a good year
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Old 01-12-2012, 12:39 AM
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A waterfall of tears,
flowing, falling,
saturating,
the pillowed landscape.
Murmurs muffled,
weeping softly escaping.
Washing away all that has been,
passaged by.

Stilled waters stagnate,
dried up putrifying bitters,
unfit for plant, animal or man.

Water cleanses,
relinquishing
everescent element
downpours and torrents,
refreshing,
parched mired clay.

2012


the spirit of this poem is such that it would be better sung in Na'vi
Very nice poem Mika.

Strangely premonitory considering today's depressing anouncement.
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Old 01-12-2012, 03:15 AM
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Thank you HNM and versicolor!

It was a reflection of mixed emotions, trying to remind myself, tears release grief and allow better things to come.

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Very nice poem Mika.

Strangely premonitory considering today's depressing anouncement.

I was going to start to ask 'what annoncement?', then I saw - Avatar 2 delayed :O,
nooooooooooooooo
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