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Old 02-12-2012, 08:48 AM
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When you're upset,
it hits me hard.
There's nothing I can do.
I try not to get upset,
though I can't be with you.
Yet, you make a dull day bright,
a black night bright with stars.
Expecting to search endlessly,
I now know where you are.
A cool breeze in winter,
Rocks on the beach,
The moon hanging over me
just out of reach,
A dark empty highway
going out of town,
Wheelbug nymphs
and worms underground,
Bright early mornings
and falling asleep,
The way to Pandora
and all of my dreams.
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Old 02-12-2012, 08:59 AM
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A most interesting poem, again.
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Old 02-12-2012, 07:07 PM
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Very nice, it gave me a cheerful feeling Whether or not that's what you were going for I dunno.
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Old 02-13-2012, 04:01 AM
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I hope so

Beautiful
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Old 02-13-2012, 05:16 PM
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Yeah, I guess that's what I was going for, like a cheer up kind of poem.
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Old 02-13-2012, 10:26 PM
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It works.
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Old 02-14-2012, 01:26 AM
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It is whistful and hopeful, therefore enheartening.
(Oh PLEASE ATEYO! NOT SO WORDY)

Nice poem. It makes me feel happy and warm,
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Old 02-14-2012, 03:10 PM
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Quote:
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...The way to Pandora
and all of my dreams.
I am not really into poetry but I like this ^^^sweet.
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Old 02-15-2012, 03:14 AM
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Thanks It really means a lot, with how much I dream
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