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Old 03-31-2012, 01:29 PM
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Peace at last,
Lying here steadfast
In the Great Mother’s arms.

Was it not my time to go?
I guess that I will never know,
I am here stuck in the oblivion.

I hear voices whispery and distant, yet so close
I try to speak out yet I cannot hear, my voice a ghost,
I will remain lost but not forgotten,

In the Great Mothers’ arms.




I guess this poem is a little sad, but I wanted to make Grace's voice live on.
so this is for you Grace.
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Old 03-31-2012, 04:00 PM
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Very, very nice
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Old 03-31-2012, 06:24 PM
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thankyou, it was just a moment of inspiration and I had to write it down and share it! Grace must not be forgotton
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Old 04-01-2012, 01:44 AM
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I like it

I want to see Grace return though...
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Old 04-01-2012, 03:39 AM
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I very much like the style you used in that poem. Quite innovative, and yet nice.
Reminds me, I need to write more poetry...
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Old 04-02-2012, 12:58 AM
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I liked the poem a lot Amitiri, please write one about my favorite person in the movie, who will not be in the sequels, Trudy Chacon.
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Old 04-02-2012, 06:32 PM
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Short and sweet, though acknowledging something sad. I really liked it
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Old 04-02-2012, 08:27 PM
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thankyou all, and Niri Te I will write a poem about Trudi when I have a moment of inspiration, this poem just came to me whilst I was wating a snadwich LOL
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