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Old 04-08-2012, 12:42 PM
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The Cosmo's Dance
To a Cosmic Design,
Aeon's pass,
Yet the Celestial Divine
Holds steady the journey of its courses.

To the passing eye
Slowly time progresses,
Indiscernable movement

The Sun holds steady,
So does the Moon,
Neither would alter
Lest lead to disaster.

The Day to one,
The Night to the other,
Yet reality is they are constant
To each other.

Brief Interludes,
Intervene apparent,
But Eclipses have never
Been what they seem,
Something far more potent,
Portent, Beautiful
In the meaning.

Tis when the Sun and Moon,
Have their own sweet joyful interchange
Without the Earthly body to intervene,
The Heavenly Concourse,
Watches lovingly,
Its the way its always been.

The Earth succombs only
To its hidden unnecessary fears,
The reality though never appears.

Then as quick as it happened,
Its passes over,
And once again,
All that Is continues the same!

The Cosmo's Dance
To a Cosmic Design,
Aeon's pass,
Yet the Celestial Divine
Holds steady the journey of it courses

Passaging beyond the ken
Of mind, matter or time!
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Old 08-16-2014, 09:40 PM
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amazing. really well written
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Old 08-16-2014, 11:05 PM
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amazing. really well written
I'm wondering where Moco is with all her necro post awards
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Old 08-17-2014, 09:21 AM
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lol, actually I'm just obsessed with poetry (call me a sissy if you want ), so It's not like I didn't mean what I said. besides, what's wrong with bringing a topic back to attention
Rather have this one on top than my amateuristic ones I'd say.
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Old 08-19-2014, 06:25 AM
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So, I've just read all the recent poetry here.

I quite love this piece. Very interesting and well written indeed. I like the feel. Vivid imagery. Seysonìltsan!

And ma Blue Wolf, your stuff is really great too! Your stuff really makes me think.

Unfortunately, I'm not this gifted with poetry in general. The only poetry i write is written using the Na'vi language. In my own opinion I'm not that great, but I'd be interested in anyone's opinions.
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Old 08-19-2014, 09:26 PM
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lol, actually I'm just obsessed with poetry (call me a sissy if you want
Why would I call you that? I love poetry.
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