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Old 03-15-2010, 01:29 AM
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This is sipmly a repost of all the poetry I have written since seeing Avatar. I hope you like them.

Broken lies our dream.
Cravings harking back to a distant past,
A past long since forgotten,
Just a point in a myriad.
But all is not lost.

Repairs can be made,
Splits fixed,
Vast gorges bridged.
Yet reward comes not without toil.
It is distant but achievable.

Love is our saviour,
Collaboration our peace,
Truth our necessity.
Religion, politics, race matter not.
We are all united under our glorious orb.

Broken lies our dream,

But we are the mucilage.

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Euphoria.
State and mind of bliss.
Racking the pit of reason,
Knows no bounds.

Fallen to the cause,
A new dawn breaks.
Truth bears no longer a price,
Compassion turns us golden.

Aloft the flag of humanity is held,
Born free of our mortal coil.
We turn to face each other
And melt in the purity.

Love omits our imperfections,
Hearts and minds converge.
Old bulwarks tumble,
Outwards we progress.

A leak of glory,
A shaft of light,
We.
Are.
Free.

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Neytiri, my love

Eyes glistening with the light of a thousand suns,
A sight held only by the highest of angels,
You gaze at mine.

Amidst the sweet light of day and the emminent glow of night,
We lose ourselves in the moat of the soul.
Form and feeling entwined.

Alas, relationship is lost,
Twix'd the borders of reality and fallacy,
Yet a space remains always in the core.

True love knows no limits,
Desire, no boundries.
A more profound love could never be felt.

Yet duration remains unbreakable,
It limits as a vice,
Ever encroaching.

Until, enevitably the time comes when we must part.
But I know you will wait,
In baited suspense,

For our glorious reunion.


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A deeper heart,
Longing for passionate coil,
Is freed,
In but a fleeting glance.

Although doubt may roll in,
As viscious tides,
This flame burns far deeper,
And shall ne'er be doused.

Eylids,
Once fused shut by frivolous pursuits,
Now snap wide open.
Exposure is beauty.

For these once tired eyes,
Now enhance the intricacies,
Of our troubled,
Yet incedible globe.

Light to retina,
Retina to brain,
But this is not mere process.

This is love.
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Old 03-15-2010, 04:09 AM
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Those are deep man, really great, keep making them, words from the heart are words for the soul.
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Old 03-15-2010, 07:27 AM
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I agree with ProfoundHeart, very deep and very emotional.You are very talented when it comes to Poetry, ma tsmukan.
Word choice and descriptions are amazing. I love the one you have done dedicated to Neytiri, and the imagery of the freedom one is awesome

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Old 03-15-2010, 08:58 AM
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Thanks so much guys, these are words stright from the heart and it's very nice to have them heard.
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Old 03-19-2010, 09:53 PM
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The world and love would be lost without our poets. These brought a joy to my heart as I read them. And I've already admited elsewhere I'm such a faller for love poems. But here this one, I find my favorite.


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A deeper heart,
Longing for passionate coil,
Is freed,
In but a fleeting glance.

Although doubt may roll in,
As viscious tides,
This flame burns far deeper,
And shall ne'er be doused.

Eylids,
Once fused shut by frivolous pursuits,
Now snap wide open.
Exposure is beauty.

For these once tired eyes,
Now enhance the intricacies,
Of our troubled,
Yet incedible globe.

Light to retina,
Retina to brain,
But this is not mere process.

This is love.
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Old 03-19-2010, 11:46 PM
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The world and love would be lost without our poets. These brought a joy to my heart as I read them. And I've already admited elsewhere I'm such a faller for love poems. But here this one, I find my favorite.
Again, thank you very much. Glad I could bring a sample of my hapiness to another person's heart.

Also, may I say I agree. Language does not have to be just a vehicle for information, it can be a direct line to our emotions and to the the soul.

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Old 03-20-2010, 05:32 AM
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I agree with what everyone else has said, these are very deep and emotional... I teared up just reading your poem about Neytiri. You really have a way with words, ma tsmukan. Please keep writing... I would love to hear more from you.
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Old 03-20-2010, 11:42 AM
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I agree with what everyone else has said, these are very deep and emotional... I teared up just reading your poem about Neytiri. You really have a way with words, ma tsmukan. Please keep writing... I would love to hear more from you.
And I again thank you for such kind words. I will be continuing to write and post for a long time yet.
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Old 03-21-2010, 01:31 AM
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I wished I could express myself like that. Really, you've got talent for poetry as also an almost perfect master of language: you seem to know what words fit in each verse.

You might enjoy a Spanish poetry book, "Poet in New York", by Federico Garcia Lorca. It talks about alienation and life in the Big Apple. I haven't read it yet, but it seems to be pretty neat.
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Old 03-21-2010, 02:17 PM
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I wished I could express myself like that. Really, you've got talent for poetry as also an almost perfect master of language: you seem to know what words fit in each verse.

You might enjoy a Spanish poetry book, "Poet in New York", by Federico Garcia Lorca. It talks about alienation and life in the Big Apple. I haven't read it yet, but it seems to be pretty neat.
The highest of praise ZenitYerkes. Thank you ever so much.

Also a thanks for the book suggestion. I will have to have a look at that...
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Old 03-22-2010, 12:35 AM
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nice well done, i hope u make more they were nice to read
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Old 03-25-2010, 08:44 PM
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Thanks SullyJake1 and yes I will continue to write a lot more in the future.
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Amazing... Makes me wish I could write like that
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Old 03-26-2010, 12:14 AM
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Wow, those were beautiful Fkeu'itan. Thank you for sharing. It has been a long time since I have written any poetry. I don't have the knack for it quite like you do .
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Old 03-26-2010, 02:09 AM
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Amazing... Makes me wish I could write like that
Again, thank you HNM, it means a lot to me.

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Wow, those were beautiful Fkeu'itan. Thank you for sharing. It has been a long time since I have written any poetry. I don't have the knack for it quite like you do .
Thank you very much rapunzel, I appreciate it. I'd love to read some of your work too.
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