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Old 04-20-2010, 11:31 PM
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Default The Place Inbetween.

Painful isn't it?
When you have,
Such a grand design,
But translation fails.

A vision so vivid,
To the mind's eye...
Yet so clouded,
To physical form.

Research all you want.
It will not help.
For this is a process,
That mastery denies.

As a poet without his words,
A mathmatician without numbers;
An artist without such application,
Is lost.

All you can do,
Although futility persists,
Is try and hope,
That soon...

The vision will jump the boundary.
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Old 04-21-2010, 07:46 PM
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I know what you mean, it's the feeling of having something to say but lack the words to describe it.

The poem is also beautiful, nicely built; but if you accept critics, I liked most your other more emotional poems. This is kind of impersonal; however, I understand the need of not always having to show what you feel to the world, and rather show what you think.

But, once again, it excels at the precision of your vocabulary to put the exact word in its exact place to express a certain thought. You're a word sniper.
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Old 04-22-2010, 11:48 PM
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I do not know my friend, if this will help, but i have found when engaged in a creative process that feels blocked, a redirection of my mind, off topic or in a new direction will often through a spiral process bring me the inspiration i seek to assist the leap from my minds eye to outer form. Perhaps on your project this will work for you too.
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Old 04-27-2010, 06:40 PM
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Yes, I like that poem.

Its like you have an important thought but just can't picture it.
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Old 04-27-2010, 07:14 PM
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I have spent far too much time existing in the place between. It is painful, but it can also lead to tremendous growth. A sense of loss coupled with a sense of wonder. One foot planted in the camp of the past and the other seemingly 1000 miles away in a new future.

In a way I cherish my time in between. It's really a privilege as any never get to experience it.
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Old 04-27-2010, 08:35 PM
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I have spent far too much time existing in the place between. It is painful, but it can also lead to tremendous growth. A sense of loss coupled with a sense of wonder. One foot planted in the camp of the past and the other seemingly 1000 miles away in a new future.

In a way I cherish my time in between. It's really a privilege as any never get to experience it.
When you put it that way, it sounds just like life. The moment between birth and death.
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