Happy Birthday, Tzmukan Wokan! (a poem) - Tree of Souls - An Avatar Community Forum
Tree of Souls - An Avatar Community Forum
Go Back   Tree of Souls - An Avatar Community Forum » General Forums » General Discussion

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
  #1  
Old 03-29-2010, 12:40 PM
Na'vi taw'ite's Avatar
Numeyu
Na'vi taw'ite : "En la vida, dos cosas ciertas son la muerte y el cambio"
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: I divide my time between Florida and Hawai'i
Posts: 75
Default Happy Birthday, Tzmukan Wokan! (a poem)

Today is Tzmukan Wokan's Birthday!

I was simply going to write out a birthday post for "my brother", but I got this bee in my bonnet to do something a little...more creative. So I woke up at 3:30am with the first line of the Beatles' "Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Heart Club Band" in my head ("Well it was 20 years ago today...") If you keep in mind the rhythm of the first two lines of Sgt. Pepper's, the stanzas will flow a bit easier. I fell asleep a few times, but the poem below is the fruit of my insomnia. I hope you enjoy it!

(*clearing my throat*)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Well it was 16 years ago today, ma fellow T.o.S. smukan si smuké,
that a boy named Damián came to be, in a place called Punta Arenas, Chile.
And the way I came to know him was this (if I‘m allowed a chance to just reminisce):
‘Twas the day before it all went amiss and our beloved Avatar got a diss.

In a conference call that Saturday night, in a chatroom filled with people on Skype,
a handful forged a bond incredibly tight, and I was one of them, I’ll say with delight!
Our Damián was one of that handful, too: one of the few I call my own motley crew.
Playing football’s something he loves to do, and just like me, he loves his Dream Theater, too!

You can find him walking Mingo (his dog); he cheers his Manchester United along;
he plays his drums to the most hard-rocking songs, and he’s been plagued with aftershocks for too long.
He’s incredibly creative with food: like fish and pasta with peaches (it’s true!);
he’s learned to braid his hair (to have his own queue); and he’s been keeping up his high marks at school!

So, mi hermano cariñito, my “D”--I hope that with these words I’ve written, you’ll see:
that I love you like a brother, indeed; a big part of my little Skype family…
And now, my family here at the Tree of Souls, please make this task today your personal goal:
Would you please drop our Damián a “hello”? Because today he’s all of 16 years old!


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~



Damián--

I hope you have the best day today (and I'm sure you KILLED your Mech and Biology tests!). The only thing I wish is that we all lived closer, so we could all celebrate your birthday together. Or, we could celebrate belatedly in August!

Anyway, Felíz Cumpleaños, mi hermano!

Love,
Marilyn
__________________


Much love and gratitude to TxonTirea for my sig--squish you!
Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old 03-29-2010, 12:59 PM
Pamtseo Vitra
Fkeu'itan hasn't been here in years.
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Aberystwyth, Wales.
Posts: 2,562
Send a message via Skype™ to Fkeu'itan
Default

Awesome poem and a very happy 16th to you ma tsmukan!
__________________
"When the time comes, just walk away and don't make any fuss."
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 03-29-2010, 01:36 PM
Tudhalyas's Avatar
Hapxìtu
Tudhalyas has entered lurking mode.
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Bergamo, Italy
Posts: 193
Default

Ftxozäri aylrrtok ngaru, ma Damian!


...and congratulations to Navi taw'ite for her beautiful poem!
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 03-29-2010, 02:16 PM
TxonTirea's Avatar
Nawmtu
TxonTirea is reminiscing.
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: United Kingdom
Posts: 1,192
Default

Awesome poem Marilyn <33
__________________

Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 03-29-2010, 03:02 PM
Human No More's Avatar
Toruk Makto, Admin
Human No More has no status.
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: In a datacentre
Posts: 11,751
Default

Nice

Happy birthday
__________________
...
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 03-29-2010, 04:44 PM
Gunny's Avatar
Karyu
Gunny DUBSTEP!!!
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Denton, TX
Posts: 1,488
Send a message via Skype™ to Gunny
Default

Awesome! Happy birthday !!!! Hope you have an amazing day and blow those test out of the water like we all know you can
__________________

J Sully: "gunnish is a special accent only spoken by Gunny!"
Kestor: "Gunnish turns Zoe on."
Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 03-29-2010, 09:49 PM
Petrucho's Avatar
Pa'li Makto
Petrucho Bronies ftw
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Chile - South America
Posts: 275
Send a message via MSN to Petrucho Send a message via Skype™ to Petrucho
Default

thanks a LOT !!!! , that's really awesome thanks a lot really , it would've be better if i didn't have those two tests today but i think i PWND the tests don't mess with me biology !
__________________

Youtube Channel
Reply With Quote
  #8  
Old 03-29-2010, 10:43 PM
Skxawng's Avatar
Numeyu
Skxawng is worrying.....WORRYING!
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 75
Default

Happy Birthday Tzmukan

Nice Poem Marilyn

~Skxawng
__________________



Reply With Quote
  #9  
Old 03-29-2010, 10:48 PM
Vauktu's Avatar
Tsamsiyu
Vauktu has no status.
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 600
Default

Awesome poem for an awesome person. Happy Birthday, Tzmukan!
Reply With Quote
  #10  
Old 03-30-2010, 05:29 AM
Woodsprite's Avatar
Olo'eyktan
Woodsprite is very busy.
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Los Angeles, CA, USA
Posts: 3,162
Default

AWESOME!

Seriously... awesome. I noticed all the different little rhyme situating techniques you used; it was a blast to read (more fun to read aloud!). Wokan's lucky to have a poet write for his birthday. But most importantly, Happy B-Day to Wokan! Honestly, by the way you spoke on Skype and your voice, sounded like you'd be turning 20 today.

Hope you had a good'un. And I'm technically NOT late to post this, since it's still 11:32 PM here.
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On



Visit our partner sites:

      pandoraworld.ru



All times are GMT +1. The time now is 06:03 PM.

Based on the Planet Earth theme by Themes by Design


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2019, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.
Content Relevant URLs by vBSEO ©2011, Crawlability, Inc.
All images and clips of Avatar are the exclusive property of 20th Century Fox.