And I'm on the hook...

MOAR

No words will suffice to fully capture what I'm feeling...




except "MORE"!

Thanks guys, you're a real inspiration to keep writing MOAR.
Chapter 5 soon.

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I just read chapter three and i will be reading chapter 4 soon! I LOVE IT SO FAR! i cannot wait to see what happens :P

Yay! <3
*fanman hug*
Gawd, Im sorry its been so long since a chapter, (Sunday Morning 5am)
But expect another tomorrow. <3333

Chapter 5:
Tsu’tey awoke to Jake staring at him intently;

“Tsu?”

“Yes, Jake?”

“We won’t be going back to the clan will we....”

“Kehe, ma tsmukan....”

Jake sighed and stood up, still gazing at Tsu’tey

“Pxasik!” Screamed Jake

Tsu’tey raised himself off the floor, and hugged Jake tightly. Jake seemed to tense up for a second, before letting Tsu’tey hold him gently. They stayed like that for what seemed like an eternity, Jake breathed the words

“I love you too”

Tsu’tey’s heart froze; blood supposed to be running to his vital organs seemed to rush towards his cheeks.

“Really? I thought I was crazy to even thi—“

Tsu’tey didn’t finish his sentence; Jake had embraced his love in a tight hug, and planted his lips on Tsu’tey’s. Holding each other for a few seconds, Jake pulled back and whispered:

“Answer your question?”

Tsu’tey could do nothing but blush and smirk, and Jake was smiling warmly at him. Every part of Tsu felt alive with love, and he just couldn’t stop smiling. Slowly he uttered the words

“What will we do now Jake?”

“I know just the person to see”

“Who?”

“Grace”
--
Mo’at stumbled through the trees towards the gate of the tawtute base, breath coming in rasping gasps; she put her back to the cold stone still surrounding the base and groaned aloud:

“Faysawtute”

Pushing through the ajar gate, she wandered towards the only building with lights twinkling inside.
--
Eytukan awoke, knowing what he had done. He swung his legs out of the hammock, and feeling very pleased with himself, walked towards where he thought Mo’at would be. Striding into the tent, he looked over at Mo’at’s hammock, saw that it was empty and thought nothing of it. She always awoke early to check on the Clan members, and then she would wander off into the forest. Sometimes not returning all day, but Eytukan wasn’t worried at all... But there was that one possiblity...
--
Grace was in the beginning stages of growing the Avatars, a very complex process involving splicing Na’vi DNA with some Human DNA so the Human could link correctly to the Avatar. She saw a lone Na’vi enter the compound, and activated a camera. Zooming in, she saw it was Mo’at!

“What in the name of....She would never come here. Never. Something is wrong”

Grace groaned; this day was turning out just like she had planned. She had some spare time, why not solve a crisis or two?

“Still a long day.”

Opening the science block door, she walked down to greet Mo’at.
--
Jake’s mind hadn’t been at peace for so long, it was almost surreal to him. Walking through the forest to Hells Gate with Tsu held close, he entered a state of nirvana. All the problems in the world seemed to melt away, and for that short time, things like not belonging with the Omaticaya meant nothing to him. He just wanted to be with the one he loved, anything else was trivial to his interests. Jake gazed at Tsu and felt nothing but absolute love for him.

“Tsu’tey?”

“Srane?”

Jake hugged him again, and kissed him gently on the forehead, before continuing walking towards Hells Gate.
--
“Ok, Ok, Slow down. Jake has disappeared, and Tsu’tey attacked Eytukan?!”

Mo’at responded in broken English:

“Srane, Tsu’tey told his love for Jake last night”

“Wait...what?”

Grace collapsed into her chair, massaging her temples. She was a scientist, not a relationship councillor for God’s sake.

“Do you believe Tsu’tey would attack Eytukan unprovoked?”

“Kehe. Rutxe”

“Mo’at, I’m not the best person to deal with relationships, you don’t know me very well”

“I am sorry Grace Augustine, But you are uniltìranyu, just like Jake”

“That doesn’t make me understand what’s going through his head!”

Mo’at began to respond, but at that very moment Jake burst through the door holding Tsu’tey’s hand and began to speak:

“Grace, Tsu’tey was protecting me from –“

Grace rolled her eyes, stood up and shouted

“Can everybody just shut up a damn second?!”

Silence....just silence. Grace tried to savour the moment, before sighing heavily and breathing the words

“Jake, I know what you’re going to say, I’ve been told by Mo’at here already. So there’s no need to come bursting in telling me what you and Tsu have been up to for the past night”

Tsu’tey blushed deeply, and shuffled behind Jake a little.

“Now, what we need to figure out is what the hell Eytukan is doing. I don’t see anything wrong with you two loving each other, but as we have learned Jake, there are intolerant people on Earth, seems it’s on Pandora as well.”

Jake sighed, and nodded his head. Showing the mark on his face he replied to Grace;

“He hit me right here, and Tsu’tey leapt out to defend me”

Tsu’tey’s blushing doubled, and he had completely moved behind Jake by then, hiding himself from Grace gaze.
Mo’at stood, and walked over to the window, staring out over Pandora’s surface, her expression sharpened.

“They’re here.”

“Who is?”

“The Clan”

(TBC)
Yaaaaaaaaawn, I hope you enjoyed that one guys. I enjoyed writing it. I know it took a while, but as you can probably tell, it was a crucial chapter, and needed to be written right. <333
Chapter 6....is coming.
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4 Days of a cliffhanger and now another one....AHHHHH Jack!! It's great!

<3

~Skxawng

<3333
Lol, I enjoy my cliffhangers.

I demand moar.

You wanted a reaction? Here's one: "Aaaaaaargh!"

I started reading this sitting on the edge of my sofa, my laptop on the coffee table. As I continued reading, the angle of my body went from 90 degrees to the ground and started leaning toward my laptop...further and further. At the end, I was about ready to topple over.

This thing is more addictive than some of those silly daytime dramas I used to follow when I was younger. At least with the daytime dramas, I knew I could see another episode during the week. But now I'm left asking, "When will I get to read...

MOAR?":shock:

Thanks guys, and damn, you really do like this story huh? :) :party:
Now, for me. Sleepzorz. Ill see you guys tomorrow. <33

Ok, you zombies calling "MOOOOOOOARR"
Chapter 6 is being planned - Might take a while from now on. The chapters have to be purrrrfect... < See what I did there?
:D
So yeah, I don't know about time of release. But you'll see soon enough.

That's quite a cliffhanger :P

Ok you guys, keep your ears to the ground for Chapter 6, its coming soon.

Last time I did that, Eltu stepped on my head.

O_O
But still, its almost finished.
<3

I actually want to find out what happens :P

Chapter 6:

Tsu’tey couldn’t believe this was happening. He frantically looked at the faces of Jake, Mo’at and Grace, all staring intently out of the window.

“What are we going to do?” Muttered Tsu’tey

Grace glanced over at him, shook her head and slumped into her chair again.

“What the hell is he doing? I didn’t know the Omaticaya could be this arrogant!”

Mo’at simply sighed, growling the words “ayskxawng and fayvrrtep” under her breath, and walked down the stairs to the exit.
Tsu’tey nearly leapt after her, but a hand grabbed him on the shoulder. Turning around he was gazing into Jake’s eyes...again. He merely shook his head and sat down looking out of the window, watching Mo’at walk across the old concrete towards the swarming clan at the gate. Tsu’tey moved to his side and gazed after Mo’at.
--
Eytukan observed his mate walking over to him, Mo’at had an angry scowl on her face, and most of the clan retreated a few steps in sheer respect for their Tsahik. Not Eytukan though, he knew what she was doing, she was trying to defend this monstrosity between Jake and Tsu’tey. He smirked at her and shouted mockingly:

“You want to be with the mutants? Enjoy your time with them then!”

To this the rest of the clan sniggered, but Mo’at’s eyes continued to burn with a bright fury that went un-subdued by Eytukan’s taunts. The clan picked up on Mo’at’s fury, and continued to move backwards, slowly but surely as Mo’at prowled towards them. Mo’at moved right up on Eytukan, and snarled in his face:

“What are you all doing here!? You have NO right to come looking for these two, and you have NO right to come looking for me!”

Eytukan’s confidence dulled, Mo’at’s commanding authority was winning the clan over from right under him.

“We came to take you away from these mutants; they will infect you with their shared sickness!”

Mo’at merely smirked at Eytukan; fear mongering was one of his tactics, to scare everyone else into agreeing with him.

“No, they will not. They think differently to you Eytukan, and I fear you have lost your sight”

The entire clan recoiled in shock, and Eytukan and Mo’at just stared at into each other’s eyes. The line had been drawn, sides had been taken. The Omaticaya was splitting.
Eytukan seethed with anger, so much so that you could almost see the venom in his glare at Mo’at. Mo’at’s returning stare was one of indifference, there was no anger, and there was no love. She looked at Eytukan with zero feeling.
Mo’at knew she had overstepped the mark, but she didn’t care. There were two sides now. Giving Eytukan and the clan one last withering look, she turned and started to walk back towards the Hells Gate science block.
--
Jake and Tsu’tey had observed this through the cameras around Hells Gate. Of course, they didn’t have any audio, so they got about half the story. Jake knew what had happened. He could see the pure venom in Eytukan’s eyes, and the indifference in Mo’at’s. Tsu’s face was grim; he knew that there wouldn’t be an end to this any time soon. Grace rose from her chair, walked over to the nearest water source, poured herself a glass of water. Turning around, she sighed and said in a typical sarcastic fashion:

“Cmon Troops! Let’s save the Omaticaya’s pride!”

Rolling her eyes, she stalked off to open the door for Mo’at.
Jake turned to Tsu, and pulled him into a hug. Tsu’tey let out a little cry when Jake pulled him, but soon they just stood there, in complete silence. The world slid away, leaving just the two of them, in their moment. One they would share together. Forever. Jake smiled at his love, and they walked down to greet Mo’at, hands held.
--
Eytukan continued to stare at the tower, contemplating charging it and killing all of the people inside. But he couldn’t. The Clan weren’t fully behind him, and he still loved Mo’at. He would retreat, and leave them to their own devices....For now.
--
Mo’at, Tsu’tey, Jake and Grace. They all sat in the lower part of the Science lab, contemplating their next move. Mo’at spoke scarcely, if at all. Grace was being her typical moody self, and Jake and Tsu’tey just hugged a lot. Finally, Jake spoke up:

“So....What are we going to do, we can’t camp up here for the rest of our existences! We have to either win over Eytukan, or....”

Jake drifted off into deep thought, and every occupant of the room knew what he was thinking. Mo’at stood, looked straight into Jake’s eyes and slowly whispered:

“Kill Eytukan?”

The entire atmosphere of the room changed, even Grace stopped with her churlish expressions and snapped her attention to Jake’s face. Jake felt his cheeks getting hotter, and tried to speak, stuttering, and back peddling as fast as he could. Tsu’tey stepped up, put a hand on Jake’s shoulder, and said slowly and strongly to Mo’at:

“If he won’t let us be who we are inside, it will come to that.”

(TBC)
Wooo, that was highly enjoyable. Written to The Last Train Home By Lostprophets. Also, new important info. I'm going to be releasing a chapter every Wednesday night. Although sometimes that may be impossible. I will try my best though guys. (Oh, and the final few chapters will be exempt from that time schedule, they need to be...epic.)
Love you! :party:

I have no words for this... it's just...

just...

:P
*passes out*

"Mo’at’s eyes continued to burn with a bright fury that went un-subdued by Eytukan’s taunts..."

"The clan picked up on Mo’at’s fury, and continued to move backwards, slowly but surely as Mo’at prowled towards them..."

"...even Grace stopped with her churlish expressions and snapped her attention to Jake’s face."

Oh my heavens, Txon: your writing is CAPTIVATING, both in the vocabulary you used and how you've fit those words into such descriptive prose. I am now suspicious that you're only 15...

And as always, the dialogue is COMPLETELY believable, from the somewhat stilted and formal English spoken by Mo'at to the tone of Grace's words.

The "Word Nerd" in me salutes the wordsmith in you...

...and demands "MOAR"!!!

(Edit: I just read Txon's message saying a new installment is due each Wednesday. Waaaah! You mean I have to wait a whole week? *starts to tremble from withdrawal*)

!
 

As usual a great chapter Jack.

Can't wait for the next chaper :)

~Skxawng <3

Very nice.

Love all of you. Thanks for the comments <333
Yup, schedule says next Wednesday. You people should be happy now you know when you're getting your dose of Fanfiction! <3 :party:

Just so you know, Im planning on doing about 20 chapters...or maybe...less..or....MOAR. >.>

You'd better do more than one per week then...

Haha, I have to give some time to my loved ones. And to myself! :party:
Every Wednesday.
<33

MOAR I say! Where are you jack!

~Skxawng

Hahahaha, Im sitting here on Sunday morning. Im going to plan it today, Ok? Just so you know I'm not doing NOTHING! :party:

Here's something I haven't mentioned before, it's not too important so don't worry about it.
but when you use speech you HAVE to have something after it for example.


“What in the name of....She would never come here. Never. Something is wrong”

should be


“What in the name of....She would never come here. Never. Something is wrong...”

It has to have a comma a full stop etc after the speech before the end of the ".

Other than that nice story :)

Ellipses are not used to end speech, that constantly means you're leaving the sentance like "TBC".
Other than that, yeah. But it is the tinyest error...

New chapter tonight people. Stay tuned. :party:<3

Chapter 7:

Jake stood gazing across the bioluminescent forest, towards where he knew the Omaticaya would be huddled. All of them could be with the ones they loved, why couldn’t he and Tsu?

“Probably because we’re mutants “Muttered Jake softly.

Turning around and walking back into the shadowy embrace of the Hells Gate science block interior, their makeshift “Home”. Glancing around the small room, he saw Tsu’tey sleeping soundly on a small bunk. Tsu’tey was so beautiful and so peaceful. He stared at his lover’s face for what seemed like for an eternity, until a voice interrupted his daydreams:

“He is a great man Jake Sully”

Mo’at almost purred into his ear, making Jake stumble forwards, standing up hastily.

“Yeah, yes...I mean, Srane.”

“Do not be frightened by my presence Jake. I have seen the way you stare at him, the way you shower him with love just from a gaze”

Jake’s cheeks flushed, how long had she been watching him?

“Mo’at, what are you doing? You’re jeopardizing your life with Eytukan, and the Omaticaya by staying here. We are not worth it.”

Mo’at stared at Jake for a long time, and with a sigh, sat down near the window.

“Ma Jake, Eytukan cannot see what you and Tsu’tey have. He would have seen, before the...battle, and after the loss of Neytiri...”

Jake’s heart still felt pangs of sorrow, but his face didn’t show it.

“...His sight seems to have left him. I do not know what happened to him, it may be the hatred of your past race that has clouded his mind. I just do not know.”

Jake tried to keep looking at Mo’at, but he couldn’t. He felt so much guilt for even mentioning hurting Eytukan in any way. That would be one memory to look back on, or at least one he would remember for the rest of his –

“Jake?”

Tsu’tey had risen from the bunk, and stood to walk over to Jake.

“Tsu, go back to sleep...Me and Mo’at were just.....talking”

“I know, and I’ve been listening”

--
Some members of the Omaticaya had gathered together in a small tent, expressing doubts about the actions of Eytukan.

“Why would he do this? Eywa hasn’t struck Jake Sully or Tsu’tey down for their love, and I do not think she would.”

“We need to help them; they’re trapped up in that horrible tawtute base!”

“How can WE help them? We would be removed from the clan too!”

“I am going to help Jake Sully and his friends. Anyone who doesn’t want a part in that, move along.”

--
Eytukan paced his tent, plotting his next move. What would he do? Thinking of Jake, he growled the words:

“Tìyerkup skxawng!”

Why must they do this, he could leave them be if Mo’at would just stay with the clan. But not now, something must be done. They turned his mate against him, they must pay.

--

Jake awoke lying next to Tsu’tey and smiled broadly. He remembered what Tsu’tey had said to him last night, and how they had slept in each other’s arms. Still smiling, he roused himself from the bunk, and walked over to the window. Seeing a group of Na’vi walking up the path towards the base, Jake’s muscles tensed. Whatever they had come here for, they would be leaving bruised and beaten if they came to hurt him or any of his friends. Jake’s eyes tracked the Na’vi for a few more moments, before deciding to confront them. He put on the headdress he received during the crisis, and strode out of the door towards them.

Reaching the gate before they did, he raised himself to his full height, tensed his muscles to try and look as intimidating as possible. He opened the gate, coming face to face with a young male Omaticaya. Jake growled as menacingly as possible:

“What are you doing here?”

The young clan member looked scared out of his wits, which was just what Jake wanted, scared opponents make more mistakes.

“I’ll ask you again, WHAT.ARE.YOU.DOING.HERE!?”

“We’re here to help you!”

“Help me? Excuse me while I let my guard down elsewhere. Tell me why you’re REALLY here!”

“Rutxe Toruk Makto, We are here to help you!”

The phrase Toruk Makto threw Jake; no-one had called him that for quite some time. He stepped back, and strongly said:

“Explain yourselves. Now.”

The kids backed up quite a bit, well out of hitting range of Jake.

“We don’t agree with what Eytukan is doing, not at all. We came to help you with the small things like food and water.”

“Are you being a smartass with me?”

“Kehe! Kawkrr!”

“Siltsan... Carry on.”

“Well, we...we just don’t agree with Eytukan, we think he has lost his sight.”

The boy’s friends seemed as astonished he had said that as the boy himself. Jake’s expression softened.

“You guys don’t have to do this, you know? You are just kids; don’t ruin your lives for something you don’t understand for something as fickle as loyalty.”

“It’s not fickle, and we DO understand.”

“Are you SURE?”

“Srane, completely.”

Jake smiled at the kids, strong willed as they were; it would be a huge shock to their system to have to keep secrets from their clan. Back on Earth, humans were always keeping secrets.
“Probably why society is such a shambled wreckage” Thought Jake.

“Ok, here’s what I need you to do...”

(TBC)
*Yaaaaaaaaaaawn* 00:40 @ Time of writing this. Im tired. I really enjoyed writing this one, in fact, I enjoy all of them! Anyways, sticking to the schedule as I said I would. <33
Written to: Story Of The Year - Razorblades
Oh, and to anyone that didn't understand the Na'vi in the chapter:
Siltsan = Good
Kehe = No
Kawkrr = Never
Rutxe = Please
Tìyerkup skxawng = That moron is going to die!

Awesome as usual Jack!!! <3

GIEF MOAR!

~Mark

Yay! Thanks! <33
MOAR you say?
*Looks at next Wednesday*
Not yet.... :party:

Nice one... this is surprisingly good :)

Yay! Another comment from Mr HNM! <333
Glad you like it! :party:

*sitting on the couch leaning forward toward my laptop*

Oh JEEZY CHREEZY...the cavalry's just come aboard, and...

-snip-

TBC

Aaaaaargh!

(Seems I'm not capable of coherent thought anymore...the only words echoing are "More...more...MOAR!")

And am I the only one who thought a week took FOREVER? :P

That comment made me lol IRL. Hahaha. Yes, I'm such a git for using cliffhangers. I learned the cliffhanger "MOAR" technique from the best. *glares at Lyra*
<33 :party:

hehehe, so true :P