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Chapter 8:
Grace lay upon her bunk, staring at the ceiling. Mulling over the day’s events, Grace sighed: “Lovely, the family has had another little fight, and we get dragged along to it.” She sat up, walking over to the window she gazed out and saw Jake conversing with some Omaticaya teens. “Nice Jake, bring the kids onto our side, because what we need right now are more kids with NO understanding of what is going on!” Groaning with exasperation she turned and continued her work on the Avatars. -- Eytukan sat upon his throne frowning. Mo’at had not returned, it had been nearly 3 days. Surely they can’t stay up there forever? Could Mo’at actually care for these creatures? Eytukan snorted; they wouldn’t be a problem for him much longer, but Mo’at was troubling him. Would she fight for these creatures? Would she DIE for these creatures? “Fayvrrtep!” Eytukan yelled She would either join him, or she would be outcast with these abominations. He would not let the Omaticaya fall to such disgrace. -- Jake had sent the teens off to gather food, which would keep them busy for a few hours. Jake turned and was walking back towards the science block. All of a sudden, rain started falling from the heavens. Jake raised his face skywards, willing the rain to wash over him. A voice startled him from his trance: “Jake?” He turned quickly around to see who it was, but there was nobody there. “Jake?” With a lightning bolt of adrenaline, he remembered who this voice belonged to. He didn’t quite understand how to speak back to her, but he could guess. So he tried thinking the words. “Neytiri?” “Yes Jake, it is me.” “Why haven’t I passed out? Why aren’t I in the purple fog that I usually am when I talk to you?” “The purple fog symbolises an obstacle in between you and your love.” “I’d say Eytukan is a pretty big obstacle! What is wrong with your father!?” Neytiri sighed, and despite himself, Jake felt shivers run down his spine. It was almost like she was right beside him. “He seems to be in his own purple fog, without sight, without faith.” “Can’t you talk to him?” Jake blushed furiously after he....thought it, how could he ask that so easily of Neytiri? “No Jake, I cannot. His mind is completely closed; he is refusing contact with Eywa. In fact, he hasn’t connected to any part of the forest since you and Tsu’tey confessed your love.” Jake groaned, he was afraid of that. “Why can’t he see? There has to be something we can do!” “That is not for me to tell you, you must forge your own path. Whether this path leads you to grief or happiness is your decision. Now I must leave you....you have company.” Jake turned, startled, and saw Tsu’tey standing right behind him in the rain. “Jake? Are you ok? You’ve been out here for a good two hours!” Jake tried to speak, but he couldn’t find any words. Tsu’tey saw his love struggling for words, and hugged him close. They held each other in the rain, the rain that didn’t feel cold. Tsu’tey released Jake, only to kiss him full on the lips. Jake’s entire body relaxed, and warmed to Tsu’tey’s. They kissed for a long time, drinking in each other’s presence, their love. Together, they would beat any obstacle. They would beat it, for neither could live without the other. Tsu let Jake go, and whispered the words: “I love you Jake” -- Mo’at paced the room, not doubting for a second that Eytukan and the clan would be planning another offensive soon. Something she couldn’t hold off alone. How could her mate, how could he do this to her?! How could he do it to Jake and Tsu’tey? They both saved the Omaticaya from certain extinction! If they fell in love, what of it? They were fine together, and obviously Eywa didn’t mind either. So what was his problem? She tried to think back to a time before she was his mate, a long time ago. He was always a very strange boy, and his relationship with his father was not pretty. She couldn’t grasp the memories that evaded her grasp, like wisps of smoke on a morning breeze. She sighed, and sank back into a chair. She needed a way of remembering, but how? -- Jake walked towards the gate, holding hands with Tsu. Opening the gate, he saw the teen Omaticaya run through the gate, carrying armfuls of food. Jake and Tsu’tey smiled at them and closed the gate behind them. The group walked back to the science block, and met with Mo’at. “We need to send them back to the clan, to help us.” Jake’s eyes widened, Mo’at couldn’t think this was a good idea! “We can’t send them back, they could be hurt!” “Kehe, they will not be harmed. We just need information; also, we need to move from here.” Jake had known this for some time; Grace was going to be pissed. “Srane, I know. How are we going to gather information, and more importantly, what information?” “We are going to learn why Eytukan despises your love so much.” Jake felt his trepidation rising, whatever the reason, it couldn’t be good. (TBC) Sorry for the delay you guys, I'm feeling better now. Right, the plot is getting underway now. XD MOAR next Wednesday. <3333 Leave comments below! And to all you people who view this fanfic and haven't posted yet, SHAME ON YOU! (Written to: Paramore - When it Rains) :party: <333 |
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Thanks to all you guys who read this, I'll be taking the plot somewhere from now on. I feel like I've just been leading you around and around. Next Wednesday, it begins. <3
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Chapter 9:
Jake couldn’t sleep that night; evil dreams haunted his nights, like threads of cobwebs that would never blow away. Sitting up in the hammock he and Tsu’tey shared, he groaned and stepped down onto the cold floor. Glancing around the room they inhabited, he realized how much of a luxury Hells Gate had been. All of the members of their little group crowded into one small room, the ambient mood was one of general angst and sadness. Morale had been pretty low lately; Grace had nearly yelled Jake’s head off when he told her that they had to leave Hells Gate. Sighing inwardly, he walked over to the room’s entrance, and gazed out over the edge of the cliff. -- Eytukan woke up with a start, staring silently at the roof of the tent he now dwelled in alone. His dreams quickly dissipating, like mist in a strong wind. Soon his only thought was: “I am alone.” Quickly this thought vanished too, and only an all consuming anger filled him. It was their fault, again. They took her away from him. They were lucky enough to love each other, to feel the same things for one another. Why didn’t that happen to him?! -- The teenage clan members had returned to the clan, and been welcomed with open arms. Not one of the clan suspected espionage. Ner’zhul didn’t know how on Pandora he was going to find out why Eytukan hated Jake and Tsu’tey so much, or what kind of tactical plans they were planning. Jake and his friends had moved, so any plans against them at Hells Gate were redundant. Provided they could not fight amongst themselves at their new location, they wouldn’t be found for quite some time. Ner’zhul casually strutted around the Vitraya Ramunong like every person did at his age. He was less arrogant than all of them; he was just acting this way to not arouse suspicion. Spotting Eytukan sitting on his usual throne, the old Clan-leader looked half deranged. Bloodshot eyes, face flushed with anger, his usual deep voice was ragged and on edge. “This is going to be very, very difficult” -- Eytukan yelled angrily at his fellow clan-members, rage flowing like a river from every pore on his body. Every thought was pure hate towards Jake and Tsu’tey, at how they could be so lucky, how it was unjust, unfair. “They won’t be together.” Eytukan growled to himself -- Tsu awoke from a deep sleep, reaching out for where he thought Jake would be. He wasn’t there. Tsu was suddenly wide awake; Jake seemed so distant lately, barely eaten in days. Tsu’tey knew about Jake’s nightmares, he could hear him calling out in the night and see him reaching for people that weren’t there. It chilled him to the core to think that Jake was unhappy. Pulling himself out of the hammock, he wandered over to Grace standing in the corner. “Grace, where’s Jake?” “How do you expect me to know? He probably wandered off in one of his midnight stupors” “Grace, please. I’m very worried for him.” “You’re worried about him? I’m worried about the rest of my friends, who are not as lucky as us, without Avatars, they WILL die.” Tsu’tey sighed, Grace was still very angry about leaving Hells Gate. “Please....” Tsu stared a hole into the ground, feeling his eyes well up with tears. He was very worried, and very lonely. “He walked off that way, said he needed some time alone. I’m sorry Tsu, I’m just...I’m as unhappy about this situation as you are; we need to be able to work together if we’re going to get through this. You ok?” Tsu looked up, expecting to see sarcasm flowing from Grace’s eyes. Instead, there was none. There was only sorrow and genuine concern. Tsu’tey smiled and said: “Srane, I’ll be ok. It is this place, it saddens me greatly.” “I know. It gets me down too. Now go on, go look for your Jake” Grace smirked, and lay down on her hammock. -- Jake sat alone, legs dangling precariously over the edge of the cliff. He felt cold inside. As if to emphasize his point, thunder raked the sky, and specks of rain splattered his face. He thought of all the people that had died, Trudy, Neytiri, and all the innocent people. He had fought with some of the best warriors and people he had ever known, fought with them, bled with them. Now they cast him aside like this? For loving another male? Jake had thought the Na’vi were different than humanity. Maybe he was wro— “JAKE!” Why were they outcast? Why couldn’t they understand? Was it all pointle— “JAKE!” Jake fell backwards, the sky spinning. Vision blurring in and out of focus. A blue figure grabbed him and gently lowered him onto the ground, muffled sounds of sorrow washed over him, steadily growing further and further away. He couldn’t see, couldn’t feel. Further away. The sound was dying. Further away....Further Away. Nothing but purple fog engulfed him. (TBC) Phew, that was a good one. Now, I'm expecting Fkeu'itan to come to kill me for more now. I must rest. <3 I told you I'd be taking it places! Written to: Story of The Year - Time Goes On |
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Gimme an M! Gimme an O! Gimme an A! Gimme an R! What does it spell? MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR! I love where this is going Jack, I really do. Keep up the awesome work! P.S. No rest for the wicked they say and that's exactly what this is. :D |
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Chapter 10:
Distant sobs broke through his dreams, shattering the veil of peace he had been drawn inside. They pierced his heart, like arrows of glass shot from the stars. He opened his eyelids, revealing the space he now inhabited. Purple fog twisted like living flame around him, moving slowly forwards, he began to hear raised voices. “I love Him! “I don’t care what you feel, I will not allow it!” “What do you expect me to do, skxawng?, I will not have a female partner!” “Yes you will.” “You cannot make me!” “Yes I can, or you will no longer be of the Omaticaya Clan.” Jake tried to decipher the voices, but it was like the purple fog muffled all their voices to where he couldn’t guess the people involved. Being forcefully pulled away from the conversation, Jake found himself thinking about what the two involved had been saying. They had clearly been both males, he could understand that from their tone of voice. As for the rest of the details, he had no idea. “Jake?” “Neytiri?” His voice seemed to echo into the void, almost losing hope of a reply; he jumped when the same crystal clear voice spoke to him. “I brought you here Jake, you must learn.” “Learn what?!” The cool, mercury like presence seemed to withdraw, and Jake was left floating in the fog. -- Tsu’tey had slept with Jake’s seemingly comatose form for the past four days, not wanting to move from his side. Grace had confirmed he was in some kind of coma, not responding to any treatment they gave to wake him up. Tsu had not moved from his side, but on the morning of the fifth day, he decided to go for a walk. What could have been done to Jake to make this happen? There were no traces of any kind of poison in his body, and his body was functioning perfectly apart from his coma. Tsu’tey’s mindset shifted from one of sorrow to one of rage. He felt like he was constantly being heated up, and cooled down too fast. It was playing havoc with him. -- Eytukan awoke alone again. The numbness slowly eating away at him, his resolve weakening. Mo’at had been gone too long, he was already thinking back to the past, back to the times before he was with Mo’at. Back to the times that he kept hidden, even from himself. The memories glowed in his mind like hot coals, and they hurt just as much as hot coals. Breathing heavily, he sat up and tried to shake them from his mind. “You never were like that, they wouldn’t let you, and you never were like them.” -- Grace was getting increasingly concerned for Jake’s wellbeing. He had passed out on the side of a mountain from what seemed like emotional stress. This was very troubling. Grace didn’t understand. It wasn’t like he was in a coma completely; it just looked like he was dreaming. It made it easier to tell Tsu’tey it was something she could understand, and keep him worrying less. “I tell you; sometimes...I just want to give up” she muttered She slowly rose from the chair and glanced back at Jake on the bed. He looks just fine, nothing wrong with him, like he’s sleeping. Grace knew better, she had theories. None of them pleasant, none of them she could fix. Either way, they were in a pretty bad situation. Tsu’tey had vanished off into the forest earlier in the day, and Mo’at kept to herself. “Why can’t things just be simple...once in a blue moon?” -- Jake opened his eyes, and suddenly was looking into the eyes of Neytiri. He jumped back as quickly as possible, running his gaze up and down Neytiri’s form. “Is it....really you?” “I told you before; I would always remain with you Jake.” Jake could hardly believe it himself, even though he could tell this wasn’t real. The purple fog lingered around the edge of the circle they stood in. For some reason, Jake was afraid of the fog. It looked so angry, so vicious. He shifted his gaze back to Neytiri, and suddenly felt the love for her boom in his chest. He shook it away, it wasn’t real. It wrenched his heart in two to finally turn her away. Neytiri looked at him quizzically, seeming to realise what Jake was thinking, but not understanding fully. “Jake, you know very little of the troubles you face.” “Well I know me and Tsu’tey are excluded from a group for being different, sounds just like happy human life” Jake muttered, words dripping with sarcasm. “But do you know why?” “Because they hate the idea of change? Because they think two males is a disgrace to Eywa?” “It seems you have already decided it is the entire clan that made this decision.” Jake faltered; he hadn’t considered...He knew it was Eytukan...but... “They didn’t exactly stop him, or disagree with him!” “And the group of children that came to help you?” Neytiri seemed to have a counter-argument to everything he said, so he’d let her win. He wanted to know the answers. “So, what don’t I know?” “You don’t know the reasons behind the insatiable hate.” Jake just stood there; Eytukan had some kind of other reason for hating them so much? His mind flew back to the conversation he had heard earlier. “No...That can’t be possible.” “Why? Jealousy, the root of most evil.” Eytukan was....JEALOUS? Of what? Why? Jake was left with these questions spinning in his mind. He screamed. The world seemed to shatter. Questions and answers slid together, the world was lost in a blue haze. Still screaming, Jake awoke. (TBC) Wooooo, enjoyed this one greatly. The plot thickens eh? Written to: Surfacing - Slipknot Big thanks to all the people in Skype that kept bugging me for more. <33 :party: |
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Chapter 11
Jake awoke in a dark room, rain pounding its monotonous tune on the roof. Rubbing his head gently, he sat up. Same place they had been for a while, it looked like everyone was gone. Jake’s first goal was to find Tsu, ask him what had happened, and why his head hurt so damn much. Rising slowly off the bunk, he felt dizziness strike him, and fell back onto the bunk. “What the hell?” He tried to stand again, and fell down again. His legs weren’t working the way they were supposed to. Beginning to get frustrated, he grabbed the wall and stood again. Legs shaking uncontrollably, he moved his right leg forwards. -- Tsu’tey stood at the edge of the great river, gazing into its depths. He thought back to the times before Jake had came, how much he had been in love with Neytiri. They seemed like remnants of a past life, so very far away and so very long ago. In the midst of these thoughts, he felt an unnatural stillness come over him. He felt like he was moving underwater, all his thoughts, movements and reactions seemed slowed. He swore he saw some purple out of the corner of his eye, but when he turned to look at it, it was gone. Looking back into the river again, he began to see horrifying images reflected in the water. Jake was trapped in a cage...guarded by himself. Tsu’tey couldn’t believe what he was seeing. Jake stared back into Tsu’tey’s eyes, and whispered the words “Help me.” -- Eytukan was struggling with himself. Past emotions began to resurface at random occasions through the days. Some of them so vivid they brought him to tears of pain or anger. He felt his daughter die over and over again, felt the rage, the sadness. He felt Tsu’tey’s confession, the anger, and the outrage. He felt...the loss, of someone he loved. -- Jake stumbled towards the doorway, threw it open, and collapsed into the rain. For some reason, he started to cry. He didn’t know why. Kneeling down in the rain, he cried at the sky, for no reason. His head throbbed, like something was trying to break through to him... ten miles away, at the edge of a river, his lover collapsed and did exactly the same thing. Someone put their hand on his shoulder, and he felt strength flow back into his veins. The throbbing in his temples subsided to a dull pulse, and suddenly he was standing. Spinning around to see who brought him to his feet, there was nothing there. “Am I going completely insane?!” -- Grace had returned to Hells Gate, she needed to check on her Avatars, and she needed a full lab to see what was wrong with Jake. Besides, sitting around a comatose Na’vi wasn’t going to do them any good. Mo’at had decided to tag along with her for some reason. Grace didn’t mind, but she was curious as to why she would come with her. Eventually, she plucked up the courage to ask her. “Mo’at, why did you come with me? It can’t be very interesting, sitting around watching me do science.” “I came with you, because you are trying to find how to fix Jake with your Science. I shall try to fix him though Eywa.” Grace should have figured that out, it was basically a competition to her? “Ok Mo’at, whatever makes you happy” -- Tsu’tey knelt on the river bed, clutching his head. Pain washing over him in waves, he tried to make sense of the sudden rush of pain, the sudden flashes of images. He screamed his mate’s name as loud as he possibly could, his entire body convulsing with pain. He wanted to fall forwards into his lover’s arms, let him soothe the pain. He wasn’t there. Stretching out his hand, hoping someone would take it, would care. He fell forwards, the darkness creeping in on the edges of his vision. Someone caught him by the arms. He couldn’t lift his head, but he felt the pain drifting away. He was gently lowered onto the floor, held in the arms of a mysterious form. -- The group of teens that had decided to help Jake and his friends were losing hope. How could they go on? Jake was comatose, Tsu’tey was depressed; Grace and Mo’at had disappeared to Hells Gate. They were alone; left to spy on the clan they had called family. Sometimes it seemed pointless, like it wasn’t worth it at all. It was hard to keep morale up when your leader is now suddenly out of the picture. -- Jake stood there for a few moments, fully remembering what had happened in the purple fog. Suddenly, Jake felt his courage flare up inside him. The same courage he had used when he fought for the Omaticaya, it now fought for his love for Tsu’tey. Gazing towards the Vitraya Ramunong, he started to walk....back to the clan. (TBC) Really sorry it was this late, I just couldn't get the right vibes, it took a while. Stuff has been going down in my life recently, so been a little busy. Anyway, thanks for being patient. Written to: Breaking Benjamin - The Diary of Jane |
What has taken so long! YOU DESERVE A SPANKIN'!!
IOU One spank Awesome chapter....Left me thinking, but no spoilers I guess :( ~Mark xxx |
Errrrm....Ohhhhhhh....kaaaay....
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