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Neytiri. 09-27-2010 08:38 AM

Children of Eywa
 
Children of Eywa: (Chapter One)


The flood gates of hell had been opened. I could feel the rain as it came down upon me; with each drop I was tormented. I could not remember the last time I had seen his face. Days, Months, Years? I could not remember. The touch of his hand, the texture of his lips. All just bitter memory’s slowly drifting into oblivion, each second seemed like an eternity. How had I gotten here? Was this my fate? Had Eywa forsaken me?

What have I become!?

I feel cold, freezing cold, what is that sensation? Almost like…water? My eyes flutter open, I hear voices, could that be him? It couldn’t be. I’ve been lost in this abyss for so long, how could he be here? His soft hands, his smooth lips, his warm arms, this had to be him. If I let go will I be pulled into that hell again? I’m never letting go again.


I’ve been having these dreams know for a while. Every night I fight through hell just to come back and realize I have to endure the same experience again that night. I couldn’t do this alone, but Rai’uk is here with me. I love him so much, he’s my world. We just recently mated before Eywa and he is the one person I know I can trust with my life.
Currently we live in a small tribe that grace helped build, Half Na’vi, Half Skypeople. It turns out there where literally hundreds of Skypeople who didn’t believe in what Quaritch and Selfridge where trying to do. Which eventually lead to a revolt at hell’s gate and since then the Skypeople have been living with us. We don’t always get along, but we do our best, I’ve been studying English since they arrived and I am currently the tribe’s ambassador to the Skypeople, it’s not always the easiest being stuck between two different species who don’t always see eye to eye, but that’s life I guess, Eywa intended for me to be in this situation so I must have some purpose here.

“Woah! What are you doing?!” I yelled while dodging a flying fork.

“It’s gone! It’s all gone!” Elyannia shouted.

“Just calm down okay, I’m sure I can help you find whatever’s missing if you’ll just tell me what you lost” I replied.

“The food…It’s all gone” She sighed.

“Ok, try and think back, where was it last time you where here?” I asked.

“All over the place, All the cabinets where full, Oh god where could it have gone?!” She sobbed.

“Just try and relax ok, its only food, Just look outside, we have rows of crops, It’s not the end of the world” I said.

“I have nothing to trade; my family and I had only so much to live on until next week’s rations come in.” She gasped in between sobs.

“It’s okay, I have plenty back home, just come with me okay?” I asked.

“I couldn’t though, you need…” she said before I cut her off.

“I’ll be fine, I’ve lived here my entire life I think I’ll be able to find something to eat” I said sarcastically.

She laughed and said “Yeah your right, Sorry for almost killing you with that fork back there”.

I smiled and said “ Don’t worry, I get so much stuff thrown at me I might as well take up dodging random objects as a hobby.”

She laughed and asked “My names Elyannia, What was your name again?”

“You can call me Ker’txu.” I said as we entered my home.







Somehow I knew that us meeting was no simple interaction. Somewhere buried deep inside me I knew we were destined to meet like this. We would have a much more to do with each other’s lives then anyone could have ever imagined.

If only we knew.



Elyannia 09-27-2010 08:43 AM

LOL epic fork flying skills XD Really awesome so far. [Well duh it has me in it! :P]

Human No More 09-27-2010 09:13 AM

hehehe :P

Moar please.

Neytiri. 09-27-2010 09:18 AM

thanks guys :D, The next chapter will be on its way in a few hours, Insomnia is inspiring me to write lol

Helicoradian 09-27-2010 09:18 AM

Good start :)

and that Elyannia has quite a temper lol

Elyannia 09-27-2010 09:36 AM

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Originally Posted by Helicoradian (Post 97427)
Good start :)

and that Elyannia has quite a temper lol

XD welllll

electrosphere11 09-27-2010 08:36 PM

ooh, interesting. Them forks are a hazard.

Advent 09-28-2010 11:53 AM

Very interesting.

Forks. Oh, how I hate them so. Why can't we use spoons instead?

Elyannia was in it? Hmm. Any other mutual friends coming up? ;)

Neytiri. 09-29-2010 10:02 PM

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Originally Posted by Advent (Post 97967)
Very interesting.

Forks. Oh, how I hate them so. Why can't we use spoons instead?

Elyannia was in it? Hmm. Any other mutual friends coming up? ;)

Yeah there should be several other friends coming up shortly :P I need characters for my story so I figured I'd include a few people I talk with all the time, make it interesting :)

X.,.Pandora.,.X 09-30-2010 12:03 AM

*raises hand* pick me!!!

Neytiri. 09-30-2010 02:07 AM

Children of Eywa: (Chapter Two)


The dreams haven’t ended, In fact they seemed like they were getting longer. As if something was slowly creeping towards us, inching forward every time ever so slowly as if it where impending doom and all we could do was sit and let it become us. Every day I fell asleep I could see the Sorrow, The flames, the suffering, but I could never get close enough to tell what was causing it.

Over the last few days it seemed Elyannia and I were become closer and closer each second that passed by. The elders of our tribe didn’t approve but there so stuck in their ways they could barely tell a Skyperson from an Ikran. In the beginning I didn’t have high expectations for Elyannia but over the last week she has showed an interest in the forest that I have never seen from any other Skyperson so I told her I would teach her our ways but she could never mention it to my Olo’ Eyktan. He would be the last person who would ever approve of us teaching the Skypeople, while we did agree to host them in our tribe; it was never something we were excited about. Yesterday my love Rai’uk came to me and asked if he could join us while I taught Elyannia our ways, He has become interested in the ways of the Skypeople since I started hanging out with Elyannia and wished to study how she reacted to the forest. Obviously I told him that I would love to have him there with me.

“There so beautiful, what are they called?” Elyannia whispered.

“We call them Nantang, but your people call them Viperwolves” I replied even quieter.

“The young ones are very…beautiful as you say, but they can be extremely dangerous in pack’s, if you ever have an encounter with a pack your best option is to look as big as possible and get as high as you can, any tree would work just as long as they can’t follow you up it.” I stated.

“If they are so dangerous then why are we only ten feet from their breeding grounds?” Elyannia asked nervously while glancing over her shoulder.

“We’ve been following this particular group for weeks now, we’ve been able to successfully trace their hunting routs and have been able to estimate approximately what time they will return from their hunt” said Rai’uk.

“Approximately?” gasped Elyannia who we could see was getting more nervous by the second.

“Which is why we are going to get what we need and leave as fast as possible” I replied.

“Which is?” Elyannia asked.

“Do you see the smallest pup near the left of the mother? He is what you call the runt of the litter, and he will die soon due to his brothers over powering him for food. We are bringing him back home with us.” I said calmly.

“How on earth do you expect to be able to get him? Those things are vicious!” she yelled.

“I’m going to come at them from the side, The mother’s paying so much attention to the other puppies she won’t even notice he’s gone. Just to be safe you guys better be moving by the time I’m back here, because I’m not stopping running till we get back home.” I said as I moved into position.

With one swift movement I was flying through the air, the second I hit the ground I scooped the half starved pup and disappeared into the night, all I could hear was the rain hitting the leaves around me. This forest, my home, its beauty lasted forever. The cold breeze against my skin, the shallow of breath of the baby Nantang in my arms, I could feel the flow of the forest, each step was a sign sent from Eywa, with each breath I became more and more a part of the forest, I could have ran like this for eternity but I was snapped out of my trance when I heard Rai’uk calling my name.

X.,.Pandora.,.X 09-30-2010 02:11 AM

the plot thickens...

Icu 09-30-2010 02:16 AM

Good stuff keep it coming :D

Should be fun to see where this ends up going

Neytiri. 09-30-2010 02:33 AM

Thanks for the support :P

The next chapter's will be written as soon as I get back from getting some food :P

The beginning scene for Ch.3 is going to be pretty steamy If you catch my drift ;)

electrosphere11 09-30-2010 02:35 AM

oooh, what will happen next. And where are the rest of Eywa's children :P


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