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The Clock
Counting down
To the transpiring Of the circumstantial, The coiled spring On the threshold Of unravelling. Unknowing Uncertain What the new year will bring. Heartache Or Happiness, PAD Or PAE, Hopes, Dreams Fulfilled, Or a shattering Of illusions. The clock works Wound up tight, Palatable tension Marking the passage One year passes Another pursues. Vibrating resonances, Certainty, Anxiety, Expectation, Fears; Recoil Merging Awaiting In the tangibility Of possibilities; Silent The impending moment Is deafening! |
Pretty good! Nice implementation of PAD, haha!
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A really great poem. Does an excellent job of creating the feeling of a tension, a build up of everything that has preceeded.
Like waiting for a dam that is creaking and cracking, to finally burst. |
I like it, I'll try and think of it on New Year's eve...
...if I'm sober anyway. |
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