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Mika 02-12-2011 11:13 AM

Fractured
 

Fractured


Splitting hairs

Fractured mind

Everything came undone

Magnitude

Overpowering

Overwhelming

No wonder

Its taken a year

To recover

Awakened

Then splintered

Senses

Aware

Uncognizant

Effected

Unraveled

All walls

Tumbling down.

Too many

Questions

Unanswered!



Slowly

Painfully

Recovered

Puzzle pieces

Start to fall

In place

Now

Seeing

With

Fresh Vision

Whole

Strengthened!

Human No More 02-12-2011 01:10 PM

:'(
Very expressive... and the ending is good :)

Fosus 02-12-2011 01:24 PM

I like it. :shy:

This is the kind of poetry that I understand. :)

James of terra 02-12-2011 09:39 PM

That is cool Mika, as said before great ending!

misstammie 02-20-2011 08:31 AM

Very nicely written.;):)


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