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Human No More 04-02-2011 01:03 AM

I think that could be the different perspective, although I'm not sure, not really done any of this myself :P

Either way, loving the progress so far :D

fierox 04-03-2011 01:53 AM

thx for the feedback all.
Hmm yeah part is perspective and her pose but still..
I also wasnt sure the lenght and stretch of her body was right. After seeing that full body picture of her just standing especially. When i started i had very little reference so it was mostly on feel really.
Thx for pointing it out again Prowler, made me relook into it.

Below a picture of things tweaked and stretched a little, what you think? or did i went too far? Been looking too much at it i guess, im not sure :)

https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/_z...prntscrn32.jpg

Oh and thx Misstammie, it would be fun to do and have both ney and jake.
Guess it depends on time and also on what i plan for a short animation i want todo when done.
No idea yet what that would be about and what i would need for that :)

tm20 04-03-2011 02:34 AM

looks great :)

Pa'li Makto 04-03-2011 04:42 AM

Nope, you didn't go too far. ;)
The neck is a good length and when you think about it the torso is pretty long before it curves into the stomach and hips. ;)

prowler 04-03-2011 08:07 AM

looks great now! :) Can't wait to see some more progress.

Pa'li Makto 04-03-2011 08:15 AM

I know!! I can't wait Fireox!

fierox 04-05-2011 01:03 AM

Yes i also think her lenght etc is better now, more Navi, less human i guess so thx for the feedback!
Added some more detail and her necklage. Not really happy with the feathers yet but its a start :)

https://lh5.googleusercontent.com/_z...prntscrn33.jpg

tm20 04-05-2011 01:13 AM

looking great, and for the feathers, try making them more fluffy around the edges. it looks really solid. colours are perfect. keep going! :D

Pa'li Makto 04-05-2011 05:37 AM

Pretty good!! I can see this coming near the last few stages now. :D
It's tantalisingly close..

prowler 04-05-2011 09:15 AM

Looks very good, like tm said the colors on the feathers are already good. :P

Human No More 04-05-2011 12:29 PM

This... is... awesome :D

fierox 04-07-2011 12:50 AM

Thx for the feather tip! increasing the amount of fluffyness around the edges really was it. Looks good up close now but from a distance its still a bit solid, might increase it a little more.
Yeah this part is coming to an end soon. Cant wait to add movement and emotions.
Before i start on the next part everything have to be right, no easy changes or fixes then so if you see anything wrong do let me know!

https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/_z...render036.jpeg

https://lh5.googleusercontent.com/_z...prntscrn35.jpg

Pa'li Makto 04-07-2011 01:50 AM

Nice so far!
However, I suppose the the feathers need to be wider and Ney's eyes seem to be green rather than yellow in your model.

Susano'o 04-07-2011 10:37 AM

Moar! :D

prowler 04-07-2011 03:54 PM

It looks really good, but something bothers me abit... For me the head looks abit big? might just be me though :P and like pa'li said maybe change the eye color abit..

See picture below..

http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/1280/divers2qx.jpg

http://cache2.allpostersimages.com/p...ers/avatar.jpg

Edit: Don't forget to add the little fluff on the tail tip :P


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