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prowler

02-23-2011 10:52 PM

A poem for Neytiri...

I decided to try and write a poem for princess Neytiri te Tskaha Mo'at’ite of the omaticaya... i never wrote one so... :shy:

You’re beautiful
Your eyes are big and yellow
Easy to get lost in them
I have done it countless times
Your hair upbraided or braided
Has to be the best hair in the world
I just want to be close to you
Forever and ever
As long as I will live
Take my hand
Let’s walk and never stop
And never look back
Your my love
I love you

tm20	02-24-2011 06:47 AM

nice :)

Human No More

02-24-2011 02:25 PM

:'(

I love it... clearly shows so much love for her...

prowler

02-25-2011 04:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tm20 (Post 130332)

nice :)

thanks for the comment :)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Human No More (Post 130370)

:'(

I love it... clearly shows so much love for her...

thanks for your comment aswell :) i really find it hard to put my feelings in word :( this was the best i could do... :(

Susano'o

02-26-2011 10:51 AM

Beautifully. :'( I'm sure, that she would be delighted. :)

James of terra

02-27-2011 12:07 AM

That was great prowler, I likes it!

Hunter of the Glade

02-27-2011 02:29 AM

Neytiri would be proud :*)

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_U-EBoJV_Ii...sad_smiley.jpg

prowler

02-27-2011 10:12 AM

thanks for the comments :)

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