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prowler 02-28-2011 01:37 PM

Another poem for Neytiri
 
so decided to post another poem for Princess Neytiri...


Your skin looks smooth
I just want to feel it against mine
Your lips
Looks just as fine
I want to kiss them
And never stop
What do you say...
Take my hand
And never stop?
Because i will never stop
Loving you...


thoughts? :embarrassed:

Susano'o 02-28-2011 02:58 PM

Write more! Let Neytiri will be your inspiration. Forever. :)

tm20 02-28-2011 11:02 PM

another nice one :)

Human No More 03-01-2011 09:35 AM

:'(

So true...

prowler 03-01-2011 10:43 AM

thanks for the kind comments once again :)

James of terra 03-02-2011 10:05 PM

Another artisic one prowler!!

prowler 03-05-2011 10:04 PM

thanks james :)

fierox 04-04-2011 04:16 PM

i'm very bad with poems myself, sounds full of emotion, nice work :)


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