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Alyara Arati

04-18-2011 04:07 AM

Tiny Poem nìNa'vi (also in English)

alìm livu oe
slä mìkam moe
nì'aw taw a'aw lu
sì 'awa tìvawm hu
sanhì ateng nìwotx

I may be far
but between us
is only one sky
and one darkness
with all the same stars

ISV Venture Star

04-18-2011 09:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alyara Arati (Post 139738)

alìm livu oe
slä mìkam moe
nì'aw taw a'aw lu
sì 'awa tìvawm hu
sanhì ateng nìwotx

Lor nìtxan ma Alyara! I think moe should be oeng, though. Moe is exclusive of the person being addressed. Not too sure about alìm livu oe either. Lu isn't used to express location. Maybe hufwa alìm tok oel?

Alyara Arati

04-18-2011 01:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ISV Venture Star (Post 139759)

I could do something with that, I guess:

oel tivok alìm
slä oengmìkam
nì'aw taw a'aw lu
sì 'awa tìvawm hu
sanhì ateng nìwotx

It doesn't rhyme perfectly, but then I don't require perfection.
Thanks for your comments!

Human No More

04-18-2011 10:59 PM

I love it! So true too... :'(

...I had to cheat and use the English one.

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