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06-14-2010, 12:07 AM
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Within.
O paradise...
Why do you taunt me so? Beauty so glorious, Eyes so wide. Drinking in the sight... These eyes were not meant to behold. Intoxicated and enraptured, The mind forks. It creates a new corner. Unvisited, unseen and before now, A private place within a private place. We visit now and again. And we sit... Hear the songs echo, In our deafened ears. Inhale the heady aromas Flowing to our nares. See the dull glow, In our smitten eyes. Feel drops falling, On our warm skin. Taste the electric, Shocking our tongues. Together, within our place we are real. Then we turn. Embrace for an eternity. Merging, converging, One. Collapsed in a haze of cherishment. Suspended in time, a shrine to a true forever.
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06-14-2010, 05:59 PM
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Wow... its beautiful.
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06-14-2010, 06:15 PM
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Amazing. It really touched my senses, great work =]
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 "We were given: Two hands to hold. To legs to walk. Two eyes to see. Two ears to listen. But why only one heart? Because the other was given to someone else. For us to find." "Gandhi said that whatever you do in life will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it because nobody else will. Like when someone comes into your life and half of you says: 'You're nowhere near ready'. And the other half says: 'Make her yours forever'."-Remember Me "An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind"-Mahatma Gandhi "It can't rain all the time"-The Crow
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06-14-2010, 06:34 PM
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06-18-2010, 11:13 PM
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Sorry it took so long to respond everyone.
 Thanks for all your wonderful comments, it really does help drive me. 
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