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Old 08-27-2011, 11:20 PM
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Default Onwards (Pt. 2)

And yet...
If this film of life,
Could be sped up...

It would be a capture,
In perfect resloution.
Of;

All you ever felt.
All you ever wrote.
All you ever saw,
Thought,
Meant...

To be brought forward,
Compressed and compounded,

'Till it lasted none but,
Seconds?
Miliseconds?
Nanoseconds?
Femtoseconds?

No.

None but even the infinitely slightest of flashes...



Would you miss it?
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Old 08-29-2011, 07:56 AM
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Fkeu'itan

I guess the best words i could find to describe the beauty of both poems would be

El duende




edit:

Zen Meditation

dying to die
dying to live
that's the only way
i know how to express it
the actuall physical sensation
of meditating a poem
defining a 'moment'

fovever dying
forever living
forever embracing it
forever loving it
forever not having to miss it

expansion
and contraction
birthing and dying
twinned
in a in a zero point seed

where everything exists
and nothing exists
but the embrace
of now
in a singular moment

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