Want correction immediate

[Na'vi a Kepekmì]

Kaltxì, because I can't access to Learn Na'vi forum since yesterday night, I send you message.

I want to know the correction of my last proverbs I did:
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Lì'fya leNa'vi, Eywa'eveng sì ayNa'vi zene livu yawne ngaru.
You must love Na'vies, Pandora and Na'vi language.

Na'viru, kawkrr nìÌnglìsì plltxe.
Never speak English to a Na'vi.

Srung säpi ayNa'vi, ha tsun srung siväpi ayoeng.
Na'vies help themselve, so we can help ourselve.

Frapol 'efu ayeltuti tuteoyä.
Everyone feel the feelings of someone.
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Thanks for your quick answer!

Eywa ngahu, Na'vi a Kepekmì

[TireaAean]

I already answered this earlier in email/PM

[Na'vi a Kepekmì]

Irayo ma tsmukan.