Short Poem.

[Tsmu`kan]

Hey all. I also have written a small poem. It's crappy, I know, but I like it personally.

I love you.
I love you.
I love you.

Do you love me?
Does anybody love me?

I love you.

The pain is killing me.
Who don't you love me?

I love you.

One will die.
All will die.
Love/Life ends.
Everything ends.

I love you.

Do you love me?

[Fkeu'itan]

I like this a lot, not crappy at all... To me it conveys a sense of (without meaning to cause offence) desparation and of being almost lost.

Excellent poem ma tsmukan.

[Tsmu`kan]

Originally Posted by Fkeu'itan

I like this a lot, not crappy at all... To me it conveys a sense of (without meaning to cause offence) desparation and of being almost lost.

Excellent poem ma tsmukan.

Thanks a lot.

At the time, I was rather lost, indeed.

I'm glad you like it. <3

It makes me wanna try and write another one.

[Tsmu`kan]

Betrayal.

War is back. Back it is.
War is betrayal.
Once a community. Once friends. Once family.
Now all that is left is hate.

I hurt you.

Pain.

War is back. Back it is.
War is pain.
Knives, guns, needles, words.
Now all that is left is scars.

I'm not sorry.

Blood.

War is back. Back it is.
War is blood.
Blood spiling from the body. From the eyes. From the heart.
The pain of war has it's costs.
Now all that is left is wounds.

It does you good.

Death.

War is back. Back it is.
War is death.
Knives, guns, needles words.
Weapons of the strong, Weapons of the weak. Weapons of the old, Weapons of the young.
Now all that is left is death.

Hear how it screams.

Liberate the moment from time.
Yes, paradise lies under the house.
The door falls closed.

The light...

...goes...

out.

Some parts as written by Rammstein.

Trying to explain how I feel about the AF-ToS issue and things in personal life.

[Fkeu'itan]

Wow. Again, some very powerful stuff. I love your style of writing a lot I can't say exactly why but I do.

Once again, excellent work.

[Tsmu`kan]

Originally Posted by Fkeu'itan

Wow. Again, some very powerful stuff. I love your style of writing a lot I can't say exactly why but I do.

Once again, excellent work.

Thanks again! Glad to know I don't write as crappy as I thought.

[Fkeu'itan]

Originally Posted by Tsmu`kan

Thanks again! Glad to know I don't write as crappy as I thought.

No way! Far, far, far from it!

[Human No More]

Nice... unfortunately, so true for what is going on at the moment too...

[Tsmu`kan]

Originally Posted by Human No More

Nice... unfortunately, so true for what is going on at the moment too...

Yep.

[Gunny]

Very powerful writing Tsmu'kan! Keep them coming I am enjoying reading your work brother!

[Tsmu`kan]

Originally Posted by Gunny

Very powerful writing Tsmu'kan! Keep them coming I am enjoying reading your work brother!

Thanks, bro.

[neytirifanboy]

Great work.