Fortunate Son (gen; Jake-centric)

[Sothis]

I reviewed this over at AF, but all the activity seems to be on ToS, so I'll just paste in what I wrote there:

Oh man, I love this to pieces. It's written in a voice that's so unique and different from any other fanfic, and it fits Jake perfectly. Also, good job writing in the second-person, present-tense. It's unusual, but you pull it off really well.

It's odd... so many symptoms of ADHD have been ingrained in my personal conception of Jake's character for a long time, but somehow it never occurred to me that he might actually have something diagnosable.

I'd definitely be interested in a part 2, but I understand that muses can't just be commanded about like that. :- p But I can still hope.