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Quite an interesting and a good read.
Few comments/suggestions: ------------------------------ You talked about moral and immoral actions but you did not define what constitutes a moral and immoral action precisely enough. You said: Quote:
In the suicide case you said that you would Quote:
In the section about Eli interpreting Rush's intentions, Macbeth also states something with a similar motif to "not having time to express his feelings about anything." Upon hearing of the death of Lady Macbeth, Macbeth in contemplation proceeds to say "There would have been a time for such a word." You may want to include mention of that parallel circumstance also within that particular section. Another thing to possibly include is that within "Macbeth", you could also consider Lady Macbeth to be a judging third party who was existent in the setting. She, like Neytiri, despises and admonishes the main character for being weak but leads him to perform "immoral" actions instead of "moral" actions. ------------------------- Well written. Hope to read more from you in the future. Last edited by Banefull; 12-05-2010 at 07:46 AM. |
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